 RGZ Archer 2009-06-16 . chapter 22Very nice chapter you have here. I dont know why so many people make Starfire out to be an idiot, she's a very bright young girl. So what if she has a hard time with speaking english, its the hardest language on Earth to learn! If you learned any other language growing up, your going to have a very difficult time learning to speak it. Its easier to learn Japanese than it is to learn English from the ground up.
I am a bit worried about your posting on the profile though, I can understand giving up fanfiction as quite a few authors I have come to know and love have, but yours sounds a bit...morbid. I hope that everything is alright.
Till next time, Ja Ne! |
 Unknown Lazy Ass 2008-07-28 . chapter 24 I have just finished reading all your chapters starting from one to twenty and let me tell you, it was one hell of an emotional ride. To be honest I actually didn’t like the opening, just cause I found it over-dramatized and way too friendly with Beast Boy, but then the second chapter came and I was blown away. One thing I absolutely love is your dialogue, all of it is just so real! Me and my friends talk so similar to the Titans that it’s almost creepy. And so far I don’t totally despise the made-ups, which is a first. I know I sound like a totally mean arse hole but I have good reasons. The very first one is, why the hell is Raven so damn nice? Okay, okay, scratch that. You made her so real that it’s making me so frustrated, you are one incredible author, being able to capture Raven so clear, though she does have that side where it seems like a person rather than someone that’s supposedly 'emotionless'. Still I just adore how you didn’t bash or make her do something that I would’ve made her do, or at least something I would like to see (like killing Terra) You are one talented and remarkable writer! So this further shows how amazing you are at keeping the character in check. Cause you did, you did an awesome, mind-blowing job on it!
And this is one of the few fanfics that I can truly say without a moment of hesitation that I loved Star, all the other stories make her come off as a complete ** or way too hyper. You managed to pull off the ideal protective friend, and she’s just so cool! And Beast Boy, he’s okay but I did find him a bit annoying, probably because he’s so supportive of Terra even after all the ** she told him.
Anyways you’ve inspired me to write my own fanfic for these two, and I gotta say it’s long over do. But I’m so busy and stuff, but either way, even though it might suck, I want to dedicated it to you for letting my read your godly work, you are truly incredible!
And as much as I find love overrated and stuff, you’ve made it so damn pure. I mean, I get Robin, I once liked someone and I seriously said and did the stupidest and dumbest things in less than five seconds. I can’t help but say you did a wonderful job at portraying real love, not some crappy Hollywood cheesy love scene, with the rain and kisses. I actually enjoyed the touching romance, it’s been a real long time since I’ve last read something as good as this, I just couldn’t stop reading it!
Anyways, sorry if this was a lot of rambling and crap load of whining, and I know half of the stuff I’ve written hasn’t made sense but then again it is almost three in the morning so yeah. All in all I loved your story! Up-date, and I promise to leave a real review next time. Once again thanks for the awesome read! |
 katergator 2008-06-15 . chapter 22HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Holy crap, I never realized you had posted this! No one told me -pout-
Jeez, omg Royal...
I cracked up, this was priceless... and the boys so would egg each other on that no one was taking dare, omg.
Wow... oh... Beast Boy feelin' up Robin... -fans self- Kry seriously did a good job on that one, goodness. Haha, I loved how he got wigged out though, Robin couldn't take it!
Giggle... it was great Royal. And now, I've subscribed to you (finally) and I'll know when you actually post these damn things we always talk about!
^_^ |
 tennisgal456 2008-06-05 . chapter 24im glad to see you posted again, i was beginning to worry.lol
i too am irked by those that you have so affectionately named them "starfire haters"!
poor star, she needs some robin therapy!lol
i cant believe how people treat others differently because of how they simply look or act, it infuriates me! augh! ok sorry that was my little rant for the day
taller than superman! impressive, its just one of the traits that makes her unique
aw ok so no robin therapy, but big brother cyborg therapy works as well! possibly even better (dont tell cy i said that!)
aw so it is group therapy then. this is a really touching chapter and i really like how you put it together
*squeak* that was awesome! i really like that you made this, hopefully those who dont appreciate star as a character will read this, and (hoping for a miracle here) possibly change some of their ways of thinking about her
happy summer right back at ya!
keep it up |
 cartoonfire 2008-06-05 . chapter 24ugh, i hate it when people are mean to starfire
those bastards, they dont know the kind of stuff star has been though, they have no right to judge her
if i had a bat in my hand right now...! ugh!
great chappie, i loved the ending between her and robin |
 contagiousCHRISTian 2008-06-04 . chapter 24We! That was so good! Write more! I love the Raven parts! Bwahahah! |
 Little Miss Juliet 2008-06-04 . chapter 24Ah yes, the people only hate Starfire for as much as they do because about 99% of the case is that they're a RobinxRaven shipper.
But I love Star! ^^ She's so cute! ^^ |
 G. Login 2008-06-04 . chapter 16I really liked a lot of these shorts may were sweat and cute but this one was LOLOLOLOLOLOL! bARB WAS PISSED just looking at Kory. That is interesting I thought Jason died, well not in your story I guess. I like that Dick, Jason, and Tim are brothers. It makes sense because Bruce was a father to all of them. |
 The Face Cards 2008-06-04 . chapter 24Ya make it such a small piece but then its just too sweet to complian about how short it was!!
GREAT! Star is amazing!
Yellow. |
 Mistress Dark 2008-06-04 . chapter 24 And of course, Raven could hurt those girls if she had wanted to. Great story. |
 StarryAngel 2008-06-04 . chapter 24 TO SWEET! I loved it Royal, realy, really I did! It was just a fuzzy bear moment! =) |
 Xmarksthespot 2008-06-04 . chapter 24 I hate character bashers. They should be bashed over the head with their own stupidity. |
 Xmarksthespot 2008-06-04 . chapter 23 Touching. Very nice. |
 Xmarksthespot 2008-06-04 . chapter 22 HAHAHA! THAT WAS FREAKIN HILARIOUS!@!!
Great job. |
 cartoonstar 2008-06-04 . chapter 24Great chapter, I love it.
I liked how it was about Starfire. It's tough for her, being the only alien of the group.
update soon ^_^ |
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