 Kaoru-Hime 2008-01-04 . chapter 4Chapter 4 Review (wow Imouto-chan is finished!):
*ahem*
HAHAHAHA EYE PATCH GUY! THAT MADE ME CRACK UP!! AND THE STAR WARS PART AT THE END! KIBA USES THE FORCE!
And that Scar Face guy so wishes he was Kenshin (you still have to watch Rurouni Kenshin. Kaoru-oneesamahime will make you.)
Overall that was a great fic. Very nice. Very cute...aw. Too bad the real world doesn't work out that way. Team 9 forever |
 Kaoru-Hime 2008-01-04 . chapter 3Chapter 3 Review:
That was pretty funny, especially the part where Naruto was daydreaming too much!
But really, Naruto doing Nice Guy Pose for Neji? XD That thought is disturbing! Haha!
Nice ^-^ |
 Kaoru-Hime 2007-12-23 . chapter 2Chapter 2:
That was funny actually...team Fish-Paste-in-Ramen :P
I liked it very much!
So keep writing and get the next chapters up asap, imouto-chan (: |
 Kaoru-Hime 2007-12-22 . chapter 1Aww I love it so far!
And you shouldn't hate writing mult-chapters since, you know, it's my Christmas present and everything.
I can't wait for future chapters! ^_^ |