wow this is even better then the first one i really hope that you update this soon your characters are very beleavible keep up the good work

Awesome chapter! Sorry for taking so long to read it, I had homework. Anyway awesome chapter, I'm still wondering what is down in that room Miranda found! Update soon! _

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

I liked the line "I continued to run in hopes that running would somehow help me find my way". I know she's describing how she gets lost, but it also seems to double as a description of her situation with Draco. That's clever. I like it.

What's with the jaguar?

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

This is a really good story. I've always had trouble writing a HP story with my own character in there, but you did a great job! Please update soon!

Infinite Love and Peace!

Awesome chapter, I wonder where that secret opening goes to... Update soon, the story's going great! _

Okay...first off, no underage wizard can get away with performing magic outside of Hogwarts. Not even HARRY! The only reason why Harry wasn't permabanned from Hogwarts was because Dumbledore went all "ALBUS ANGRY! ALBUS DEMAND TO KNOW WHERE DEMENTORZ CAME FROM!"!

Second of all...bitch, you crazy. Please seek some mental help. If you honestly believe you're a Hogwarts student? Well, yeah. Let's just say the nice hospital with the nice white walls have a "special" place for you. Or, of course, you could just become an hero. Either way, it's better for the rest of the gene pool.

So, all in all, your story sucks and is made of some massive fail. Thank you, and have a nice day.

Anony Mouse

I wonder who Sinc is! Awesome chapter, Lockhart made a fool of himself now didn't he? _ Update soon! The story is awesome!

Wow! Look, Draco's being a jerk! Big suprise there! Not!

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

Again, I think you're doing an excellent job. I liked the paragraph in which Marina questions if Draco is a friend or not, and for some reason, I really like the line "Once again, my friends were separated into different houses."

I think it's very interesting how, in the same chapter, you have Cissy being mean to unkind to someone because she's a Wineheart, and Mrs. Weasley being awkard with Marina because she's a Goldfield. It's a very nice juxtaposition, and it's clear from the other chapters that you're working out a theme on how people treat someone differently because of their family, what house they're in, and/or their blood status. Very good.

Yay! New chapter! So Harry wasn't the first student to see the horses! Awesome story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

Yay! New chapter! Awesome chapter, I wonder what those drawing were of, and why Cissy drew them... I can't wait to see what happens next!