|Reviews for I can't do it alone, Mai|
| Hesunohana 5/26/08 . chapter 1
so romantic !
| CagedHeart 2/2/08 . chapter 1
the ending was unexpected but funny the song totally sute the story
| Nayami-Chan 12/22/07 . chapter 1
i liked this fic and the song fits so well with it . thanx Nayami
| St. Ajora 12/22/07 . chapter 1
Wait.. So were they even going out? That's going a bit fast, don't you think? If someone asked me to marry them without us going out at all I would punch them, even if I DID love them.
Also, one more thing; sonfics aren't allowed on this site.
Now, I also noticed quite a few errors. For example, there were comments in the wrong places. Also, they were completely out of character toward the end.
Besides these, it has potential. Keep writing and practicing!