so romantic !

the ending was unexpected but funny the song totally sute the story

i liked this fic and the song fits so well with it . thanx Nayami

Wait.. So were they even going out? That's going a bit fast, don't you think? If someone asked me to marry them without us going out at all I would punch them, even if I DID love them.

Also, one more thing; sonfics aren't allowed on this site.

Now, I also noticed quite a few errors. For example, there were comments in the wrong places. Also, they were completely out of character toward the end.

Besides these, it has potential. Keep writing and practicing!