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| BlitzXColleen4ever 2008-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseYou got game dude. I like it |
| Forever 2008-05-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh, continue please, and could you make your chapters longer? Just a little of my own oppinion. |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abusePretty good chapter. Guess Colleen got used to being the team's only female, uh? Great action and fight scenes. Keep the good writing. |
| Forever 2008-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo this is your first chapter...Now start the next one...Please! |
| Omnitrix 12 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseLooks interesting. Just one question, though. What's a gardendale? |
| Mr. Forder 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseA good start, keep it up. An interesting layout to the story, makes me think of road rovers drawn anime style. |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. Please update soon. Keep the good writing and Merry Christmas. |
| Fan Boy 101 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. Please update soon. |