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Celebrytie Aris Channas 2008-05-14 ch 1,	abuseHow interesting. It's like you studied the characters and then decided what kind of sandwich they would eat. Now I have to say I know understand the saying, 'You are what you eat,' and that I know completely agree with it.
Cuban Sombrero Gal 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseLol. Lovely story you've got going here, and as always, your narration and writing style adds a lot to the plot. Incredibly original, and I really did enjoy your characterisations, even if they were a little typical of what we already know. The only thing I didn't enjoy was the way you shared each character's personality. It seemed a bit forced, as though you were shoving the ultimate facts down the reader's throat. Other than that, I really did enjoy it, and congratulations on being so original in such a cliched world of fanfic.
HiddenDepths-x 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abuseI think my smile got progressively wider as I read this, because it was just so original and quirky and perfect. I absolutely loved it, and it really was amazing how you managed to fit each character so exactly to their choice of sandwich - for such a simple idea, it was brilliantly executed. I liked the part with Ron's lettuce, his 'one thing that will be stable', as I am a romantic and took that to represent Hermione. Though that may just be me seeing things that aren't there! I also loved your explanation for Ginny's sandwich, and I thought of all of them hers was the most suited to her. The last line of hers was fantastic too, if a little tongue-in-cheek :D Neville's was sweet, as was Luna's, and you can see reading this that you really do have such a fondness for the secondary characters and have thought carefully and methodically about their backgrounds and motivations. This was a brilliant read - favourited!
MatoakaWilde 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was really delightful! It brought a smile to my face. Ron's was funny. And "Draco Malfoy has assembled his sandwich and is eating very slowly, enjoying what he has managed to obtain by any means possible." Well, you can't get anymore Slytherin than that can you?
ReviewsGalore 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseStory/Characters: 8.25/10. It is a really neat idea for a story and I think that your characters are pretty spot on, but it feels like you are telling us what we are supposed to think about this sandwich eating a little too explicitly. Maybe if you had made it from a character's POV, it would have felt less like this. Creativity: 8.25/10. Really good idea that I have not seen done in fanfic before, though your character interpretations are pretty standard. Writing: 9/10. Very well written and your style is original in this one. Believability: 8.5/10. I can picture the characters eating their sandwiches like this. Overall: 8.5/10 I nice idea that you execute fairly well. I just get the feeling at the end of each character's sandwich bit, that I am having what I am supposed to think about this shoved down my throat a bit. Professionalism: A. Everything seems perfectly in order.
IamtotallyKewlio 2008-02-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseCool. Not as obsessed with Harry Potter as I am Teen Titans, but this was also well done. I'll be think about this as I wind my way through the books. (My friend has banned me from the lunch table until I finish all seven) (Okay, not really, but it seems like something she would do...) You are one of the better writers I have discovered on
mustardgirl1128 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I didn't think I'd like it, but it's good! I love how a sandwhich can reflect someone's personality!
hogwartsgirl52 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abuseI like that! It was very simple but intriguing at the same time. :D
sasherxcopy 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abusethat. was. wonderful. a little funny, because your talking about the characteristic qualities of sandwiches, mixed with adelightfully blatant description of each charcter. way to go.
RoLiTa 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abuseexcelent history! it's a great way to explain their personalities, I really love the one about Neville and Ron Although, I took a while to read it... being from Chile and to no speak english on a regular basis, make it a little more difficult I really enjoy it!

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