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| Miyiku 2008-04-12 ch 29,  | abuseAwesome. Every situation, every talk, every feeling fits perfectly with the Sokka-Toph relationship. I've read this three or four times and I love it. I hope more Tokka scenes to appear in the original show, so you can write more Tokka Angs (Or maybe fluff ( ? ) ). Great Job. |
| number1avatarfanatic 2008-03-17 ch 29, | abuseI liked these drabbles! Short, sweet, and to the point. Well written. Keep it up! |
| Solembum13 2008-01-18 ch 29, | abuseLoved all of them! I was just too lazy to comment every drabble seperately.lol. |
| Solembum13 2008-01-18 ch 24, | abusehow sad! :( |
| Jezkalynn 2008-01-10 ch 28, | abuseAww, I loved this! I hadn't thought of Toph punching Aang in this context, but it makes complete sense now that I've seen you write it that way. I'm looking forward to more drabbles from you (once we finally get a new episode). |
| i-embrace-OCD 2008-01-05 ch 29, | abuseAwesome updates - as usual. ;) It's really cool how you read a lot into the Tokka relationship and see a lot of what goes on - you interpret and write it well. Your ideas are sometimes humorous, sometimes romantic, sometimes profound - usually a good combination of elements, though. Very well done, and I'm looking forward to more. :) |
| Winter Sapphire 2008-01-05 ch 29, | abuseThese were all so good! I loved them. My favourite in this batch was probably the one about the bracelet - that was my first thought too. That she left it behind just so she wouldn't take the chance of losing the gift Sokka had given her. So sweet. Another great four chapters. :3 Can't wait to see more. (And, btw. The Firebending Masters premiered on YTV last night - it's on watchavatar too. :D You probably know that though.) Toodle pip! -WS |
| jlandz09 2008-01-04 ch 29, | abuseYou are very welcome...and thank you for writing them. |
| Solembum13 2008-01-02 ch 23, | abusecute! |
| Solembum13 2008-01-02 ch 22, | abuseI like this one! |
| Winter Sapphire 2008-01-02 ch 25, | abuseThese were all so good! I think my favourite had to be "Between The Lines." I just loved that scene a lot. Poor Sokka, he doesn't see her face. xD I can't wait for more. :D -WS |
| i-embrace-OCD 2008-01-02 ch 25, | abuseThe last two were awesome! I mean, "Unfair" was sort of sad, but it was really, really good. It was written well and just had a certain vibe to it that I liked - and I liked how you approached the idea. So that was pretty cool. "Narrowing gaps" was just like, an entire story within itself. It appealed to me because it showcased determination in only a few words, and it said a lot about Toph's dedication, particularly toward Sokka. And yehh! Western Air Temple! :) |
| i-embrace-OCD 2007-12-28 ch 20, | abuseThese are improving. They were good to begin with, but gosh! Great! Sometimes they're windows that reveal something about either Sokka or Toph - and they're always entertaining. Deep, for so few words, too. In the last one - that showcased Toph's care for Sokka, I think, more than just blatant fluff, because it was more in character for her. Nice. :) |
| Attharun 2007-12-27 ch 20, | abuseWow. I didn't know there was so much Tokka in the third season. I'll have to watch everything again, then! ^^ Very nicely done, by the way. =D |
| Winter Sapphire 2007-12-26 ch 20, | abuseOnce again, very very nice. Sokka feeling conflicted because of the information with Suki and for letting the gaang down is something I've thought about a lot myself. You did it very well. Kudos! Can't wait for more! -WS |