 Victoria Winchester 2/27/12 . chapter 1D'aaw, so cute! I loved the way you built their relationship, slowly changing from friendship to love. That fic made me warm inside, it was so pleasant to read :3 |
 Lydia 1/30/11 . chapter 1 Hmm. Kent Brockman.
Springfield!
... sounds like The Simpsons to me ;D
lol jk good, though. |
 debby 10/25/10 . chapter 1 this was soo cute) |
 TheLegacyLives 10/3/10 . chapter 1pure win in a can. my God I love it... |
 OHMYTWINKIES 8/6/10 . chapter 1yeah its good |
 oXMiDoRiXo 6/4/10 . chapter 1Really liked this piece!
Love the way you used kiss scenes through the whole thing without over doing it.
Just lovely
Haha |
 Rachel 5/5/10 . chapter 1 That was amazing! awwh that was so cute i LOVE stan and kyle! they're so good and this is a really good story! the bit about kent brokman and spring field made me laugh! :L so thanks that was really good! |
 realfakegold 9/21/09 . chapter 1Really well written and fun to read! Also, very cute I actually squeaked irl at the end of it/ |
 Artsy Freak 6/22/09 . chapter 1Wow, that was really good! Amazingly written, and I love the emotion you were able to put into it. You've got a talent.) |
 dreamschemer 1/21/09 . chapter 1I think you handled this story really well. Not everyone can write good style fanfics while keeping everyone in character, but you did. Furthermore, I'm glad that their feelings were never one sided, or one of the boys were total assholes. All in all, this was great. |
 Cumcakesxxxx 7/12/08 . chapter 1The "seven kisses" theme for this story was very original and entertaining! That was simply to cute! I liked it very much, from first word to last! |
 Flacutono 6/13/08 . chapter 1this is awesomeness, your style is wonderful and the story is just adorable love it) |
 mr. eames 4/5/08 . chapter 1I put off reading this for a little because I was busy.
And then I read it and was like '...should have read this sooner.
It was really cute, and I love how it showed them growing up.
I like your writing style as well. |
 alan is stupid 3/4/08 . chapter 1Best written SP fic I've yet read. |
 Anonymous 3/2/08 . chapter 1 Wow! What a lovely idea! Really, I loved all of it, but in particular the cute drunken second kiss and the sweet, fluffy ending.
Aside from a few small grammatical errors (more with your choice of wording in some places, than with the syntax) you write so well that I initially assumed you were a native English speaker. Absolutely love your style! I hope to see more South Park fanfiction from you soon! |