HAHAHEHEHAHA! Daine is my fav of the tortall series, but I still found that funny!

That was sick. The rhymes were good, but it was still sick.

ROFL!

this is hilarious!

sick...

funny-ish...

but sick...

LOL! no, it was funny,but although i'm not a 'daineluvr' i still think she's an okay charecter. do really hate her or something?

LOL

You scare me. Please don't write anything like this ever again.

that was not funny.

Definite laughs there!

Alright I don't think Daine would ever do anything like that but I must say that was really funny! I thought the second chapter was really good but then again I don't like Delia! Write more! Can you please write one about Jon?

wow! i mean it? how can you live with yourself

OMG This is great! Do another one about Jon or Dom, or Numair!

I hate Daine! I love you for writing this! Write another one about Numair, I hate Numair too! Or Jon, or Dom!

That was discusting. I HATED both of them. they both were unapropperit I totally spelled that wrong Daine would NEVER do any of that.

Disturbing. funny but disturbing...

That sucked, It was weird, without taste, terribly warped...PERFECT! I LOVED IT!