Good like the first one, still poor Penelo...
But I don't want her with Vaan if he does not deserve her like in this fic... I mean... is not really Vaan faults, we don't choose who to love... but in this moment I really don't care either.

Anyway I loved the interaction between Ashe and Penelo.

Bye,
Nyrihaz

Aw, that was so sweet! I love how it's all motherly and sisterly. I haven't read the prequel, but this can stand alone pretty well, so that's good writing in itself. XD Good job!

-DarkShine07

Wow...
very touching!

(now MY eyes hurt!)

It wasn't really OOC.
I liked this a lot. It shows that Ashe can be a very good friend/mother figure. XD

My favorite scene would have to be Ashe with the noble. Are you sure it wasn't Al-Cid himself? XD
I like this story a lot. Great job with this. :)