not reli smiley but reli well written

I think it should be R. Just to let you know, Shin'a'in version of "ke'chara" is"ke'a'char". Kerowyn to Eldan, Price of Command (the part of By the Sword,
not the Oathbreakers song).-Lia

Have I got the books memorized? Yes, I do. (I actually don't, I have
a photographic memory.)

yes, i definatly think it should b rated R. just 2 let u know.

Dark, but good.

Your story is really amazing it draws in the reader, will you continue it?

Yeah, it disturbs ME, too. *shudders* Scary. I believe that one bad experience could make her go Swordsworn- I've seen the awful things rape can do, and this was pretty much consensual rape, if you know what I mean.
Anyway, very good. I'd like to know more, though- Keyala's age, for instance. At parts, she seems about fourteen, and then about eighteen, or older... Maybe you don't have an age set, but I'd sure like to know.*love and stroboscopated peanuts
Tessa

Very well written. I enjoyed this and many other of your fanfic. Please keep writing.

Your comedic stuff leaves me in stitches and your serious stuff is very well plotted and thought provoking.

Great job.