 ninja girl 2009-10-24 . chapter 18 Alias was/is my favorite tv show ever (not counting the 5th season)! I just started rereading some ff and this one popped up! I red this a long time agao and was very pleased to see it updated. Please continue with it, I belive it to be well worth it! |
 gaby47 2008-07-24 . chapter 17ohh nice chappie :)..but theres something i dont really understand...why did jack said that to dixon?...anyway plis update!! :) |
 Abi 2008-07-21 . chapter 16 Ahh dont want irnia to die shes a tad wharped but love her anyway, please continue |
 ana 2008-07-13 . chapter 16 great stuff, cant wait for next chapter |
 SecretsBeneathMySoul 2008-07-11 . chapter 16Wow. Oh my god, Irina just stabbed herself! Well, kind of...
Anyway, I kinda figured it would turn out this way. Sydney wouldn't ever kill her unarmed mother, and Irina wouldn't fight her daughter to the death like Syd wanted (series finale doesn't count--it secretly never happened).
And, imagine that, somebody wants Sydney dead. Lol! Update soon, k? |
 SecretsBeneathMySoul 2008-07-11 . chapter 15Let me guess...Irina?? Lol, I thought it funny that Sydney pulls a machine gun seemingly out of nowhere. It doesn't seem as likely as a .9 mm Baretta, or something of that sort. Walking around, even if it's just to her car, carrying a machine gun is just a tad bit suspicious!
Anyway, off to read more! This is very exciting! |
 SecretsBeneathMySoul 2008-07-11 . chapter 14Wow, a bit longer than your usuals! I was a bit surprised, but that is good!
Finally, Sydney's acting accordingly. This is what I've been waiting for. No go kick some a**!! |
 SecretsBeneathMySoul 2008-07-11 . chapter 13I think this may be the best chapter so far. Sydney's thirst for revenge has kicked in, and she's no longer an emotional mess. Also, the whole red/blue thing was nice to see, I miss that from season three!!
Great chapter! |
 SecretsBeneathMySoul 2008-07-11 . chapter 12Short, but wonderful! Sydney's got to get back in the game soon, or else Irina's going to get her, too! And Sark's all bad to the bone...that makes me sad, lol!! |
 SecretsBeneathMySoul 2008-07-11 . chapter 11Hey! Sorry it's been forever!! But, hey, I'm reviewing now, so it's all okay.
Good chapter! But I've got a few suggestions. I really like how you're incorporating different characters, that's good, but you should put a line or something seperating each time it is a new character.
Also, Sydney is taking Nadia's death really hard! It's good that she's showing an emotional side of herself, but pretty soon she needs to get **! Sydney doesn't stay sad for long. She gets even. |
 gaby47 2008-07-10 . chapter 16it is a lot better!1 lol loved this chappie plis continue who the hell is irinas boss? and why do they ant to kill syd?? |
 ana1234 2008-07-10 . chapter 15great chapter, dont know how syd will forgive irina though for killing nadia, and why did the people shes working with want them both dead im sure ill find out soon :) |
 gaby47 2008-07-10 . chapter 15i loved this chapter..i loved that vaughns emoitons where enough to calm he down and make her understood...however i have only one complain...u should make this chpaters a little bit longer...but keep up withthe good work :) |
 Aniesa a.k.a Eric's baby 2008-07-10 . chapter 15Like it please update soon! |
 ana 2008-07-09 . chapter 14 update update update please! loving this story |