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| Brooks's-Babey 2008-06-17 ch 7, | abuseOh u updated! This story is awesome, please post up another chapter soon! x |
| Brooks's-Babey 2008-06-12 ch 6, | abusewow Love this story! So different to anything ive ever read on ere before. update soon plz! |
| Blackened Yellow Rose 2008-04-12 ch 5, | abuseGreat story. |
| iwalkinthelight 2008-04-11 ch 5, anon. | abusewell well well, now rick's 'offer' is stirring things up. What's he want her to do? Will she really betray them? |
| iwalkinthelight 2008-03-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseyay you updated! I was worried they wouldn't get him out but you pulled him out. So then...those last two lines about how nothing can change them being a family...is that foreshadowing i sense? |
| firefly1987 2008-03-08 ch 4, | abusei like this story keep it up! |
| iwalkinthelight 2008-01-14 ch 3, anon. | abusewow, they're really gonna break in? I can't wait for the next chapter! I really wanna know how the break in goes. Great work, BTW. Good choice of street kids. You've done it well. |
| iwalkinthelight 2007-12-26 ch 2, anon. | abuselate marry christmas! This is awesome! Such a different spin. I love it! But oh, i wonder how the break in's gonna go. Two are already hurt and its a guarded jail with a barbed wire fence and stuff! Interesting. Update ASAP i can't wait. |
| myasiansuperpowers 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this story, it reminds me a lot of the book Can't Get There From Here. Have you read it, if not you should. I like who you chose to be the street kids, they all fit. Please update this soon, I love this story! Mina |
| firefly1987 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abusethis is a good story so far. im excited to read more! |
| hooked-on-degrassi 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abusegood satart. |
| craftyns99 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseinteresting story and a good start |
| Lexxie Sparrow 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. Cant wait to read more |