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Reviews For: Away From the System

Brooks's-Babey
2008-06-17
ch 7,
abuseOh u updated! This story is awesome, please post up another chapter soon! x
Brooks's-Babey
2008-06-12
ch 6,
abusewow Love this story! So different to anything ive ever read on ere before. update soon plz!
Blackened Yellow Rose
2008-04-12
ch 5,
abuseGreat story.
iwalkinthelight
2008-04-11
ch 5, anon.
abusewell well well, now rick's 'offer' is stirring things up. What's he want her to do? Will she really betray them?
iwalkinthelight
2008-03-09
ch 4, anon.
abuseyay you updated! I was worried they wouldn't get him out but you pulled him out. So then...those last two lines about how nothing can change them being a family...is that foreshadowing i sense?
firefly1987
2008-03-08
ch 4,
abusei like this story keep it up!
iwalkinthelight
2008-01-14
ch 3, anon.
abusewow, they're really gonna break in? I can't wait for the next chapter! I really wanna know how the break in goes. Great work, BTW. Good choice of street kids. You've done it well.
iwalkinthelight
2007-12-26
ch 2, anon.
abuselate marry christmas! This is awesome! Such a different spin. I love it! But oh, i wonder how the break in's gonna go. Two are already hurt and its a guarded jail with a barbed wire fence and stuff! Interesting. Update ASAP i can't wait.
myasiansuperpowers
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseI like this story, it reminds me a lot of the book Can't Get There From Here. Have you read it, if not you should. I like who you chose to be the street kids, they all fit. Please update this soon, I love this story!
Mina
firefly1987
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abusethis is a good story so far. im excited to read more!
hooked-on-degrassi
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abusegood satart.
craftyns99
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abuseinteresting story and a good start
Lexxie Sparrow
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abuseVery good story. Cant wait to read more
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