 NekoDarkness 2009-12-02 . chapter 10No Yuugi! that's a great to get kidnapped. hopefully Yuugi doesn't fully become like them. Update Soon! |
 Sunrise Phoenix 2009-12-01 . chapter 10OMG!
HOW DARE THEY DO THAT?! AND WHERE WAS ATEM IN ALL THIS?!
(Takes a deep breath.) Ok...I'm fine. But for heavens sake; help yugi and up-date! |
 Yami-no-Tamashii 2009-11-30 . chapter 10NU! YUGI!
T_T
You just HAD to leave it there! Where's Atem! Ooh, he's gonna come and kick some fish-people **! /fumes/
Yami: You bet I am! /glares at fish-people, who cower and cringe in fear/
~Darkie |
 Natoya 2009-11-30 . chapter 10O.O What did they do to him?! I'm glad they hadn't hurt him or killed him, but what the hell was that and what did they do to him?! And what about Yugi's bracelet!? I'm sure Atem is going to be more the ** by the time he finds Yugi again. Awesome chapter, please update again soon! |
 tinkletimekelly 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Interesting torch-our Yugi chapter. Looking forward to the rescue. Later. |
 DarkBombayAngel 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Great chapter. ^_^ |
 Dinogirl 2009-11-30 . chapter 10 OH NO!! what the heck did they do!? This is not going to end well for them when Atem gets there! Please update soon so i can see them get their butts kicked! PLease? |
 Happyfish 2009-11-30 . chapter 100.0
W-W-W-W-W-WHAT D-D-D-D-D-DOES T-T-T-T-THAT M-M-M-M-M-M-MEAN
A-A-A-A-A-A-AND
PLEASE
WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY SON!
THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME! |
 Estrella85 2009-11-30 . chapter 100_o Wow... that was an incredibly intense chapter! You did really well describing all the things that were going on and really made the reader feel what Yuugi was feeling. Great job! |
 SilverDragon-Purity 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Oh /HELL/ NO! *goes into arsenol closet and comes out fully armed, complete with bazookas and a giant rotating machine gun (the one from the second Terminator movie)* Alright where is he? Where's the slimey sonovabitch that turned Yugi? Where's Dartz's nasty fishie **? (Somehow I just know its him.) Update again soon please. *Goes looking for fishies to fry* Here fishie fishie, time to become mer-fillets! Lol. |
 spirithorse 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Very good chapter though, like the humor in the first section. Although, I only have one question; how could you do that to Yuugi?! |
 aminaluvr4life 2009-11-30 . chapter 10What an exciting chapter! I really can't wait to find out what happens next. I really hope that Atem comes to rescue him and save Yuugi from those mean people. ^_^
Look forward to the next chappy! |
 Ara Goddess of the Broken 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Wow...
That was cruel... Beautifully written, but cruel. I'm interested in a lot of the terminology you use, but I suppose since this is from Yugi's relatively uninformed view of this world, it makes sense. I do have a quick area of curiosity, did the gold of his band sink into his skin or did the shattering of it simply scar his wrist?
Can't wait for more, can't wait to see how Yami reacts to the bond being cut. Keep it up.
-Ara |
 yugixyamiyaoilover 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Your kidding me?! They just turned Yugi into one of them and destroyed his connection to Atemu! This is so wrong! |
 Yana5 2009-11-30 . chapter 10what have they done |