yugi is so brave ...
@.@
that's a little playful at the end when
yami want YUGI to KISS YAMI
but not yami going to kiss yugi...
poor yugi...
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AWESOME STORY DUDE KEEP UP WITH THE AWESOME CHAPTERS UR LIKE ONE OF MY MOST FAV AUTHORS SO I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP HEY JUST WONDERIN WHEN THE NEXT ONELL BE OUT (ANY CLUE) PLZ THX

I really, really, really liked this! Insanely much!!

~ Umbrae

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

Does Yami have a body?
In this one anyway?
Really cute, I loved it!

I really loved the mind speak and how...real it felt. It was amzing and I started picturing it and then I pictured it again as a monologue and found myself extremely dissapointed that I already had a monolouge for Drama and it is a bit late to change it now. Ah well, I wrote it anyway. Let me say it again, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

Yay YugixYami!

SO CUTE!

well... it's 12:35 in the morning and i'm exhasted! good night!

So sweet! ^^
I agree: Yugi is so much stronger then everybody gives him credit for. He's strong on his own way, on a way that no one else could be able to keep so strong.

aw col

I loved the story. Yugi did really well in overcoming two fears in one day.

That was very sweet. I loved the ending! ^__^ Usually in fics where they just kiss are nothing new, but the emotion in this was great and made it different in a good way.

Great job on this! ^_^!

Aw, that was cute. You're a very good writer. I'll be faving this one

So cute! Yami is such a sweetheart-- all gentlemanly and strong and kfhakwea. Noble. And Yugi's adorable. I liked the whole plot of this, and the mind delving stuff

Aww, that was so cute. x3

aww that was just too adorable. Yugi's shyness was cute ^^

That was cute