will this story be updated? :'(
i wanna read the rest...

ah...you know the classroom she was looking for, you got them wrong. When she looked at her paper, it said "B238" and when she found the classroom, it said "B328". just thought i'd tell you and i do blame Justin XD

"I've seen you on a roof" is not the best greeting in the world...

Pinko, died? NO! It cannot be! Pinko, you shall be missed! Wow really great story, I really liked how Edward is all rude and sorta mean- even to Winry. Please update sorta soon!

UPDATE...

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This was sad and depressing, but good, and the Clint Mansell song really fit, but...PINAKO!
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I really like this story. Weird to see Ed and Al hate each other though. EdWinness! Yay!
Sad chapter though. :(

Ye! I love it! Its so sad, but at the same time so happy! I think your making me bipolar! *laughs and cries at the same time*

Actually, I liked the rushed tone of the chapter, it was a really nice change of pace, especially since this chapter kind of called for it. The whole thing was very emotional, Pinako's death, and Winry going to look for Ed was so sweet, I loved that bit. Thanks for the update, and keep up the awesome work.

Yup, the Elrics have a lot of ** money.

Yay for Edward comforting her!

Oh. My. God. you killed Pinako?! Didn't see that one coming. AT first I thought she had been murdered. Oh well. Update soon. SOON.

Heh, I've been reading all your chapters up till now, and I am always pleased whenever i find an alert in my emaili box. ^^

I liked how in this chappie Winry finally gets her emotions back- and shares a kiss with Ed, to boot (starry eyes)- but i do agree it was a bit fast paced. I agree with you on the need-to-make-the-story-slow-paced attitude, because I feel the same way but the stories I myself write. However, I still have a love for this story, and I still am looking forward to your next great chapter!

b^^d Update as soon as possible~

XD hugging! ooh OOH! and kissing! YES!

i really enjoyed that part. well, the whole thing, really. sucks that Pinako died, though.

it doesn't seem rushed or anything. besides, good stories take time, right? ^_^

YESH! A REAL KISS! WHOO WHO!! I am very happy! Can you tell? Anyway, great chapter. I loved it. Poor Pinako...once I read how the apartment was quiet I was like "Crap...Pinako is dead!" lovin this story! Please update soon! *favorite*

Life's not fair if you're just now starting "sncnhnononl" and I started almost three weeks ago!

Also, I just want to say that I am very proud of myself! I recognized the lyrics this time! "Famous Last Words" by MCR, right?

Hahaha Winry likes Edward...and she's being stalked. Again. *sigh* such an easy target...

Update soon, m'kay?