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| Aiko110 2008-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseEW! It would've been cute, if I hadn't known these damn people! Severus is completely ugly and OLD! Hermione and him have alwayz hated eachother since the dawn of time, talk about total crack parring! The story itself and the paragraph format was great, perfect even, the story in itself made sense, a little confusing. But I'm scarred for life. |
| Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuse...How awkward. :B You've managed to write an intelligent and captivating one-shot encompassing Hermione and Snape, with both being so in-character and typical... and yet, Snape still plays the role of the instructor, and Hermione the role of the student. It's as if nothing's changed, when something clearly has. You've out-done yourself, PAS. ~Koky |
| ProperT 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseAmazing One Shot. Only Sev could have figured all that out, Ron would've been completely lost, lol. Again Great One Shot :) |
| Califaction 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseHonestly, Snape is such a...presumptuous arrogant person. Yet I like the story, because I can see your Snape and Rowling's Snape are only a little farther than a hair's breadth from each other, and your Snape is also committed, dedicated, protective, and decisive. And he has a damn fine cloak, which I was immediately envious of. :) I liked your Hermione too--embarrassed and allegorizing (which isn't a word, but should be so I can use it to describe Hermione) and just a little confused, but also successful, confident, and skilled. You've written a wonderful piece, with an allegory that was entertaining and natural, and great characterization. Your writing is smooth and unforced, and it was a joy to read. Thanks for writing and posting! |
| Clever Lass 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseHey, glad you pointed me to this story! I quite enjoyed it. The frustration of her bringing the cloak all the way back to him--and his being quite ready to send her back out into the rain in it--came across clearly. One thing: "altercations" are fights. The word you wanted was "alterations" which refers to getting a garment fitted. Nice characterizations, and I liked the ending's being mostly dialogue. Nicely written. Glad my two words were enough to inspire you to write this! May you always find inspiration so easily! :D |
| Domccus 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseWah~ I loved that! Keep writing, and Merry Christmas! |
| quik-wit 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abusethat was quick, interesting, and enjoyable (s/p?). |
| trampy onw 2007-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved this SO much! more please... |
| Requiem for a Sunburst 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseReally wonderful! Thanks for sharing with us! Merry Christmas! taek care- Req |
| Tendrilofthought 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's so wonderfully witty and warm at the same time! I can't wait to read more of your works! |
| GoodMorningCampers 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this, and Im hoping you do a sequel. Please. Or at least write more of the similar. Brilliant job. Cheers Sam. |
| septentrion 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseSnape is really a man of patience and a rare teacher. |
| Stalking SaSa 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Awesome story! Any chance of an epilogue? Bye. |