This story is scrumptious.

And though you haven't updated in a while (a little over a year, maybe), my optimism perseveres, and so I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt.
Especially when you advertise in the summary that you are continuing this story.

So I'm definitely adding this story to my favorites and subscribing, so that when you update next I'll have a glorious little email informing me of this.
Oh goody!
:D

this sounds like a very cool story and the first three chapters were awsome and i hope to read and review more as soon as they are posted

no ToT how is L gonna be uke?! xd hes like so...not uke
gosh that was intelligent
hahaha ignore me im tired :p
UPDATES :D

Please update soon, I'm dying to find out what's going to happen next.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

This is the best one shot I've ever read. No, seriously - the best. I loved every word, as you said yourself. And I love how you captured the characters, not to mention how you described the lemonish scenes :)

I absolutely loved how all the events were connected
"we shall fight for it" (L)
The sex scenes were soo steamy and hopefully someday i'll be able to write a steamy hot scene and hopefully be nearly as good as you!
I had one problem with your story though .. You made Sayu seem so young and then you mentioned she was 17 :S
that just confused me!
overall I enjoyed it and i'm looking forward to learning alot from you!
thanx for being such a good inspiration when it comes to Romance!
You're my Idol!
~Foofoo

Woah, I remember reading this story a pretty long time ago. Since I didn't have an account then, I guess I should review now x)
All I can really say is that it's an awesome story, with all the steamy lemons and whatnot ;D
I understand this story isn't your top priority but I look forward to future updates. Keep n writing!!

This is so. Hawt.

Even though it's a PWP - it's not. Now there's even an antagonist thrown into the mix, and everybody's characterization's awesome, and still the smex scenes are steamy. :D DREAM COME TRUE (pardon the pun; it's late).

I'd love to see more. But I think I'll amuse myself with the rest of your stories, 'cause they're sure t'be just as good~

here, u get ur review.
SO FREAKIN UPDATE!
its rly gd so far rite now... cant say anything abt l8er chapters...
You go Nilah!!

Please update ><
Please please please please =D

i love your story

I wanna know what Necrophilia, Scat, Water Sports and Bestiality is! Water sports... Like doing it in a pool? What's so bad about that? Yay, *blushes* lemons! Your too young to write them, and I'm WAY too young to read them.

... U-oh.. Teru Mikami.. Hmn.. I think L wouldn't like that ...
... But oh well.. ...
... Yeah.. Update soon please ...
... (Doesn't have anything to say cause she's hungry..) ...

Please Please Please Update! There story is to could to pass up! And I can't wait to see how they meet Teru! Or how it'll go with Misa! Please Please Please Update Very Very Soon

Cheza