Reviews for Of Physics And Chemistry

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Amarissia 2008-09-29 ch 3,	abuseWow, this is amazing. You're very talented, both at the porn and the actually story-writing. Excellent combination. :) I'm new to Death Note and the stories I've read so far make me definitely want to stick around. Thank you!
The.Clouds.Silver.Lining 2008-09-28 ch 3,	abuseu better continue this!! i'll love you 4ever and give u millions of cookes! xD -TCSL
GoldenKitsuneHime13 2008-09-28 ch 3,	abuseO_o wow...teru is kinda creepy lol great fanfic and hope u update soon! ^-^
yamirachan 2008-09-16 ch 3, anon.	abuseYour story is very much... intriguing. I lack the English term for the word that accurately hits the spot, though. This story is well-written, and what I believe Ryuk would describe as... juicy :) You and I share the same phobia, I'm afraid. grins I can't imagine Raito/Light being the 'seme' in any relationship due to the fact that I usually associate main characters as bottoms. :0 Che. Ahh well. Thank you for creating such a wonderful story :) An update would be very much appreciated. :D
Chibi Tsuki Hikari 2008-09-13 ch 3,	abusexD don't rush ur self with Raito being seme it's scary to think of xD I can't see him anything other than uke ^^; so I might skip that chapter. Love the story so far, and Im so happy Mikami is in it!! ^-^
marylyn 2008-09-07 ch 1, anon.	abusei think i died laughing at L trying to turn himself off. Watari naked. Oh my Kira. That was good. xD
Lady Saya 2008-09-03 ch 3,	abuseLove the story! I'm glad that Misa is Kira instead of Raito.
yi-chan 2008-08-31 ch 3,	abusethat sucks that this isnt first priority, but that just means all read your other stories while I wait for an update! ;p
TangerineTea 2008-08-23 ch 3,	abuseDESKTOP SEX DURING WORK. NEAR THE OTHERS, SO HAVING TO MUFFLE NOISES OR RISK GETTING CAUGHT. XD I feel dirty typing that, but YOU ASKED FOR IT >:D Let the boy dream indeed :D His dreams are going to be crushed horribly by the force of L's immense wrath, why not let him have his moment? Keep up the pr0n plzkthnxbai >_< P.S. I just had an idea! Sexy pictures! You know, of each other...for the road XD (just wants to see L directing Raito- "Give me a sexy look, good, unbutton your pants and slide them down your hips a bit...stick your hand in your pants..." snap* * O_O drool)
the sadistic homicidal chil... 2008-08-19 ch 3,	abuseYaay~! Teru! X3 I can just see him pressed up against Raito's bedroom window, drooling all over the glass. XD Priceless. Heehee, sulky!L is just too cute. X3 “…I am not going down on you.” was absolutely hilarious. M! We have some butter peacan in the freezer! nom nom nom Oh and btw, RaitoL is perfectly acceptable! Of course, Raito is awesome as an uke, but him occasionaly being the seme makes sense. ^_^ Please update soon!
nanachan87 2008-08-15 ch 3,	abuseThis is a smexy story n I like it so that makes me a pervert too hahahaha :D
Kiwee 2008-08-13 ch 3,	abuseIt...I...what the hell, FFN? =/ You're just laughing at me up there, aren't you, FFN God?! Way to cut off my cut off response! Sheesh. Well. I guess this means no nitpicking for chapter 2 and 3. xD I guess it's a good thing? Colons don't work well with FFN, I suppose...? Well. Cut off of cut off of cut off follows!
Kiwee 2008-08-13 ch 2,	abuseOh gosh. This is the first time I've written a review long enough to have FFN cut it off near the end! xD What was supposed to be the end of my first review is:
Kiwee 2008-08-13 ch 1,	abuseGah, I usually don't review to point out mistakes (actually, I don't review, period. I really should...), but I love this fic to pieces and pieces, so the mistakes jump out at me more and, well, ruins the experience a bit. Sorry--nitpicking is kind of my forte. xD About 1/4 in the first chapter: "But in the end, they did make it to L’s hotel room, and Raito looked around, impressed by the large, comfortable sweet." Suite, no? Then, about half way through, "The media was calling him ‘Kira’ for the English word ‘Killer’ a he wasn’t a very popular guy." The 'a' should be an 'as', and there should be a comma before. "He’d called a few people in to work with him on it, Chief Yagami, Matsuda, Mogi, Ukita, Aizawa and about six other men that were less prominent in his mind." Colon instead of comma? It's a complete sentence before and a list after. "There were traces of lipstick and tiny beads left places, like from a bracelet, so he was 85 percent sure it was a female." 'Left in places', no? Also 'weekend' is one word. xD God, I'm sorry for being so damn picky. Watch out for words that shouldn't have a space where you think there might be one--there's another few instances like 'week end' I've see. "After a moment, Raito gave a huge grin, for the show of his dad and a short wave. “It was nice meeting you, Yagami-kun.”" A little strange here, since it's L talking right after Raito's action, so for a moment I thought Raito was talking. Threw me out of the story a little, so a paragraph break or a little intro (you know, "he said..." or "she said...") might be nice. "A thousand to that hundred; so kisse on,To make that thousand up a million;" I realize this is a quote, but a little formatting (putting in spaces, adding that 's', de-capitalizing that 'T') would be nice. :) “I’m interested in you, and if the way you’ve been looking at me ever since I sat down is anything to go by, then you’re interested in me to.” Too does not equal 'to'. Sorry, not sure if this is the first time it was said, but I noticed it in the flashback thing. One of my pet peeves, though it's just one word. Dx "He’d gone from an adorable pink baby..." Sorry, another pet peeve. Either 'adorably pink' or 'adorable, pink'. -cowers- This list might go on for a bit...so, uh, sorry again. =w=;; "“Indeed,” L smirked, and hen Raito gestured to the couch." Oh noez, a letter ran away! I wonder if we'll be able to find that pesky little 't'... :) "If he ever came over again, he would make sure to bring a desert…" Bringing a whole lot of sand over to someone's house might be hard. xD If you're having trouble remembering which is which (I sure did), I use this trick--you want doubles of desserts, but definitely not so (for me, at least) for deserts. =) Just a thought here--News. I don't think it has to capitalized, but I'm not one-hundred percent positive. Same with 'Anchorman', too. "“The ‘we don’t have to be exclusive part’,”. The single quote should be moved over to be behind 'exclusive', no? "“Best detective in the word.”" WORD, YO! xD But yeah, 'world'. There's also some weird punctuation stuff, like I would have put a semicolon between 'though' and 'Watari' in "He was pretty sure Watari knew, though, Watari always knew, but he didn’t feel the need to justify it." Nothing major, but there's a few of them that I noticed. Also some weird/awkward word usage, like tongue equaling 'ligament', but again, nothing major. Sorry for my obsessive anal-ness, but I love this fic so much that I can't help but find those mistakes not worthy of the amazing-ness that is your L/Raito sex. xD I'll probably do this again for the next two chapter (if only for my peace of mind--I'd feel like I've contributed something to this masterpiece!), so "look forward" to it. I hope you update soon? I've read all three chapters something like five times over, and I've really, really enjoyed it. The raw emotions (and sexuality. Can't forget that!) and the way L and Raito interact is just amazing. And the hotness is very, very hot indeed. Hm, hotness. And now, for some fangirl raving! God, this sentence just about killed me: I’ll let you on any case you want, if you play any game I like…” Oh. My. GOD. My love for you has skyrocketed after this part, and...and...oh. My. DEAR FUDGING GOD. So very, very hot. See, even after picking the first chapter apart I still can't be coherent. That's how much this fic (and you) rock. God, I can't see straight right now. Gah. So good.
Karen Rhine 2008-08-12 ch 3,	abuseM, this has to be some of the best sex I've ever read. Plot or no plot, I'd be glued all the same!! Keep it up, it's amazing! ^_^

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