This was great, i loved every minute of it. I am rapidly starting to like this pairing and it was nice reading this story to convince me even further. The ending lines were just wonderful :-)

What a cool fic. This is only the second Albus S./Scorpius fic I've read and I'm quickly falling in love with this pairing. Its like the next generation of HD, especially with this fic, I thought you kept them IC for what I would imagine Harry and Draco's offspring would be like, knowing their parents. The Snitch was a nice touch. Even though the end scene made me sad, it was still my favorite part. Sad and bittersweet, all that could have been.
~Akire
PS:When Draco says in the end "I never knew", was he talking about them, or their kids? Seemed like you intended it to be the kids but I can see it taken either way. ^.^

Loving the reminescant ways of Harry and Draco.
Very, very nice.
Scorpius and Albus a bit different to how I imagined but everyone has their own take on characters. Well done anyway!

There goes that fluffy feeling.
Well written nonetheless!

Awwe. That was great!
I feel sorry for Harry and Draco, though.
"His lips are cold and wet with melted snow, and nothing has ever tasted so sweet." -I LOVE that line!

that was just lovely.

The nitch is my favourite part but I also loved the car ride.

I agree wholeheartedly. “Here’s hoping we don’t end up like them,” I whisper. I raise an invisible glass to mock toast that; he does the same. When we pretend to clink our glasses, our fingers brush and my stomach lurches. He just smiles at me and takes a sip of the air. -So cute.

I really love this story. It's nostalgic and beautiful. Nicely done!

Aw, now I want to cry. That was sad and sweet at the same time. Good job. Adios!
-CatJetRat

wow, that was...infintily sad. Beautifully written, as per the norm, and i adore your take on AS/S pairings.

MannyWitch

That was heartbreakingly lovely, good job.

One small thing: in the first (After the Epilogue) you had both boys be in Slytherin... in this one, you had them in Gryffindor. O.o

I'm still sniffing over here. Thank you.

i loved it 'cause i can totally see this happening
maybe because i like slash
but after the horrible epilogue i just hoped (sp?) that Albus and Scorpius would make up for their father's stupidity
...
needles to say i'm a crybaby, and it showed at the end

you should really write another one to this. where harry and draco are able to be together. i love that al and scorp are but it just breaks my heart when harry and draco so obviously love each other and have to act like they don't.

Aw.

I liked this a lot...

But the end was really sad, with Harry and Draco.

awe, that was so sad!
the ending I mean the rest was so sweet!
I loved it all though! great job!

Agh, both heart-warming and heart-breaking all in one... wonderfully written!