W O W. Cool!

I agree with Fantasy Wings.
Great job with this story. Hope you write some more!

What a cute one shot! It's longer--definitely.
Beside her bed on a nightstand, laid a letter and a ring that

Ashelia had missed terribly. She picked up the keepsake and put it on her finger lovingly. She told herself that she felt warm inside because it reminded her of Rasler, but in reality it was because it reminded her of Balthier.--favorite scene.

“Ashelia…I do love you. Please remember that if nothing else.”

Just the look in her eyes told him what he wanted to know, and so without waiting for a reply, he leapt over the edge of the balcony and disappeared.

Ashe raced to the edge and looked down for him, but he truly had disappeared. She thought back to his last words and she knew she would never forget anything.

~favorite scenes~

Great job with this story!


~Fantasy Wings~
--I was giggling with this line!