 xx-kittycat 2009-12-11 . chapter 1!♥
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okay; serious time. I love this. Did it show? haha.
Well, first of all, i love how you describe winter. As i sit here with my rainy weather i really miss the snow because it's december and it should snow, not rain. Oh, i can feel the cold against my skin, and hear the sound of silence as the snow mutes everything, but my footsteps C: sigh, yes, it's a beautiful picture you paint there.
But the major point is this: i -love- how in character they are, especially i love how you wrote sasuke here. The scene were naruto tells stories is just.. magical, amazing, a killer. I love how.. insecure sasuke seems, in a way, you know? insecure is not the word though.. hmm.. but it's more like.. sasuke doesn't quite know what to do or how to act? and afterall, it's not often he ends up in a situation like that. which is what makes it so cute when he does! do i make sense or am i rambling? x) I'll stop now.
again: love it ♥ |
 Shadeofblue 2009-06-10 . chapter 1I like this one-shot but I'm a little confused about the ending. Sasuke is gone as in left the house or went to orochimaru? |
 Aeriel Cross 2008-09-08 . chapter 1Aw this is only a oneshot?? Sigh. But still! It was wonderfully written.. i like the part where sasuke broke into naruto's house... hmm. Though the lack of an argument between them sure is a little weird. =) But i liked this piece nevertheless! |
 Orgasmic Rainbows 2008-08-30 . chapter 1Sad. Very sad and sweet. It almost made me cry -sniffles- |
 xxguesswhoxx 2008-05-09 . chapter 1so sad but so good |
 Feilyn 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Oh! This was so beautiful. Thanks you so much for writin ^^ |
 Valentine Satiguss 2008-04-19 . chapter 1Aw. So cute. The last line did kinda broke my heart though.
*sniff sniff* |
 Jiggary 2008-03-17 . chapter 1-screams- kute! |
 Akako-Chan 2008-03-04 . chapter 1wow that was such a good story i really liked it just the whole ending was good except for when sasuke left hehe |
 xSayuri-sanx 2008-02-25 . chapter 1gone as in not there or gone as in went off to the snake bastard? |
 shirilyle 2008-01-01 . chapter 1that was cute |
 Anime Yaoi Lover 2008-01-01 . chapter 1That's so-so-so-so...so sad! I'm gonna cry! Poor Naru...and poor Sasu too, when you think about it...so sad! *goes off to cry in little corner* |
 Fields of View 2008-01-01 . chapter 1AHH! It was so warm, so peacefull and so tender.. and then.. you went in for the kill T__T! the last line killed me.. but the moments are built up so nice.. especially when I see this as the last moment Sasuke gave Naruto before he left.. AHH! T__T it's full of emotion and I just love the tenderness - very IC, I love, love, love it. favorite christmas one-shot I see this year!!
happy to see your writing again!! (love) |
 BloomToPerish 2007-12-28 . chapter 1The image of Naruto in snowfall is an incredibly, incredibly cute one. And mittens! Aw!
I liked this- very nice and fluffy. But sad at the end. I liked the kiss- and Naruto failing to recognise for what it was.
I hope you had a nice Christmas and have a lovely New Year! |
 FireFlame102 2007-12-26 . chapter 1aw, i loved it, it was so cute, OOC, but i really don't mind, it was still cute and adorible |