That was so beautiful!!Very sad though because "something could have grown".

Wow! That was really, really, really good! Well-written (if with a few typos) and powerful. I cried. That was fantastic! Anyways, great fic!

that is so sweet! I loved endings like taht but in some way it's a bit predictable but good enough for a one-shot!

So sweet yet so sad.
The relationship that could have been, only to be stolen away.
Thank you for writing this. It was an enjoyable read.

That was so tragically beautiful... the language, the way you worded all worked so well together. This piece had personality, a voice of it's own, and emotion that... I can't even describe it.

Well, before I become completely incoherent, allow me to say thank you. Please continue writing.

Your story is really beautiful. I don't really have any other words to describe it and it's making me cry.

...i'm so sad and crying so much that i'm having trouble breathing.

This was so bittersweet. I loved it!! But I feel like crying... Great story!

Really, really good. I cried at the end, but I really liked how you wrote this. Keep up the great work.

Heart-breaking! The connection between them is so real, I was so rivetted reading this, nice job!

Dwa! This is so sad >w< I love the part whre it says, 'but he sees the old woman, pretending and flaunting unreal youth, he sees her hazel eyes look down, mind elsewhere from what her mouth is saying.
Because her star pupil is slipping through the loose throng of people, weaving in and out to get to the front where his knees meet the slippery ground and he is leaning forward slightly for the Godaime to have access to the back of his neck; her star pupil is coming to the front, and not for any reason involving her teacher.
No, because the rain is streaking her hair and face and leaving beads in her long lashes, but there are streaks that start from her eyes and maybe aren’t the rain, because it is truly impossible to tell, but her expression is startling—,' That part is just amazing!
And I love Winnie the Pooh ;) Yay Tigger!

Wow. That was amazing.
~Smile!~

This story is so beautiful and bittersweet. You can feel the warmth and sadness eminating as you read. Wonderful job, it made me smile.

Besides the fact that it is nothing short of breathtakingly amazing, I'd have to say that I cried for at least ten minutes after.

I know that it couldn't have been any better than it is now, but I can't help being half and half with the ending. I have always pervered the much more cliche, happy ending, but if I could, I wouldn't change it for anything.

I love this more than words can express and I think that you need major kudos. (A smiley face would a apropriate here, but I can't seem to muster one from my tears, although they seem to be happy.)

wow thats really good.
made me cry~

great job