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Reviews for: Stained
kitsunelover300
2010-01-02 . chapter 1
Yeah, they all did have some memories of their life as humans except for pride it seems but that's only because he blocked them out because they were painful for him. Anyway good story, it's going straight to my favorites ^_^!
EspeonAngel
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
This was really amazing! If this was the worst thing you've written, everything else most be Newberry Award material ^^! I LOVE Pride and I love how you captured him! I loved the ending also, with him crying even though he doesn't really remember Winry and Al. But, every Homunculus at one time did show something of their "past life" right ;)?
Chibi Hayaku Hashiru
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
Wow... I never thought Pride would do something like that... I mean, yeah I don't like Winry and everything, but that was really intense! (intense in a good way) I like it though. ^^ Good luck with the flying monkeys thing!!
GlyNchaN
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
Holy cow! I must be sick to want to real something this sad... then again, I don't care.. All I know is that I love this and this is really cool... Not that I want to kill Winry or anything... I can practically imagine Ed screaming inside.. wanting Pride to stop what he's doing.. The ending was great too, With tears managing to fall from his eyes... ^_^
Jessica
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
OMG! I always wanted to read something like this,though I didnt think pride would actully go through with killing Winry!That was so sad,and she seemed happy about it too.Sad, but awesome! Great job!
DemonRaily
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
=D one day you conquer the world of flying monkeys, but till then i only can say: good job!
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