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AngelMoon Girl 4/30/06 . chapter 1
Loved this story! So sweet and cute.
SailorCreative 1/1/06 . chapter 1
That story was just helplessly adorable!
Embo Karalis 9/9/05 . chapter 1
I love this story and 'Chibi-usa's first Christmas'! They're so Kawaii! I always wondered what Chibi-usa would be like as a baby and this is almost exactly how I imagined her early years. Keep up the good work!
Deep Serenity 8/9/03 . chapter 1
good job agian, LOL it was funny and I think accurate to see Serena having some trouble with Reni, ANd I loved everything about Crystal Toyko. Always wished they had done more scences there
Moonprincess202 1/3/03 . chapter 1
This is so cute! I like how Chibi-Usa gets Luna-P
Mangaka-chan 10/16/02 . chapter 1
...as a person of Chinese descent I have to say i'm a little uncomfortable about using China as a nation conflicting with Japan. But it is true that since WWII China and Japan have had an uneasy relationship. Any how, enough about histroy! The story was great, i liked how everyone was so worried when she got hurt, it's sweet! But i think Pluto was the one who give Luna-P to Small Lady, not Ami.
Shsway 9/2/02 . chapter 1
Fantastic! A double explanation of things cannon to the series"Puu's" friendship with the wee one, and the origin of Luna P.
I always enjoy your stories. It shows that you've had lots of time to hone your skills, since everything you put together seems almost effortlessly so. I know better, but I am envious of the flow and rhythm of your words.

You're right every story completed is one step closer to realizing, in your own heart at least, what it means to be a writer. Your offerings give the rest of us loads of encouragement.
TsukiNoBara 8/26/02 . chapter 1
*smiles* Chibi-usa is so kawaii! Even more when I imagine her as a two-year-old!

C-chan
Samika 4/20/02 . chapter 1
This is sooo cute! Keep writing!
sailor stella 3/15/02 . chapter 1
Oh I liked that one. PLease write some more to it. I would like to find out more about
Rini at that age. Try mine, Stella in Time. I think you might like it.
EmpressGalaxia 9/14/01 . chapter 1
Made me grin endlessly. Too bad author alert turned itself off for me, now I have to check in all the time. ..
ivy 9/10/01 . chapter 1
MAKE MORE MAKE MORE! it was great.
Ally the Sugar Fairy 9/10/01 . chapter 1
That is soooo stinking cute! I loved it. That's almost exactly how I picture the relationships between Serena and Reni..
Sophia Prester 9/10/01 . chapter 1
This is so sweet! You got me completely hooked at the beginning with Serenity almost looking like Usagi as she slipped and almost fell. That was a good way of showing us that this was Crystal Tokyo, but not quite the Crystal Tokyo of the 30th Century. One thing I would have liked to have seen a little more of is just how Crystal Tokyo relates to the rest of Japan,(you say it's a city state of some sort), especially since there seems to be a Japanese government and there is trouble with China. It's not essential, however, as this story still stands nicely on its own. On the other hand, it seems like you could easily make this part of a larger fic if you cared to do so. Nice work.
Immeblue 9/9/01 . chapter 1
I loved this fic, it was great how u showed us the way Small Lady met Puu got Lunz P.)
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