 Mantineus 2008-01-08 . chapter 5Good chapter. Keep up the good work. |
 Mantineus 2008-01-01 . chapter 4Interesting, good chapter. |
 Princess dogooder 2007-12-31 . chapter 3Yikes. That's serious anger he's got there...lol. If you feel like IMing me my Aim is Misslaurie19 and my YM is Hejustsayswait |
 Dragon's top hat 2007-12-31 . chapter 3brillant! wobderfully writen and very well thought out. foolish of him to trust a criminal with deadly wepons so close to his neck. oh well thats his problem. :) i can't wait for more. do update soon please |
 Mantineus 2007-12-29 . chapter 3Good chapter. Very gory. |
 smashing 2007-12-29 . chapter 3That all seems rather messy. Why didn't he just slice his throat in the first place? |
 Mantineus 2007-12-29 . chapter 2Good chapter. |
 Mantineus 2007-12-23 . chapter 1Interesting start. I can't wait to read more. |