DUDE U MADE THIS STORY WAY TO SHORT U SHOULD HAVE MADE IT INTO A 10 TO A 90 PLUSE STORY I MEAN U SHOULD ADD IN MORE LIKE WHEN THEY GET TO BISMARK DO THEY GET MARRY WHAT DID FIREBALL FOUND TO DO AS A JOB THERE DID HE BECOME A LAW ENFORCER OVER WILL THEY HAVE KIDS OR WHAT THERE IS ALOT OF Q&A THERE THATS NEED TO BE ANSWERED SO GET BACK TO WORK MY MAN OR GIRL AND PEACE ON THE NEW FRONTIER

I SURE HOPE THERES ALOT MORE TO THIS THEN WHAT U GOT HERE I THINK U SHOULD MAKE THIS STORY BIGGER MUCH BIGGER LIKE 50 TO 60 OR 100 PAGE LONG THERES ALOT TO TELL HERE LIKE U COULD PUT IN THE VOLTRON FORCE IN THE STORY I MEAN THE BEST TEAM THE LION TEAM

I love your story! is great! I hope you can write more in the future ... I really hope so!

Congratulations!

Scarleth

I know it is a little late to leave a review but I just finished to read the story and I think it is really good, and of course because I love this couple.

know it's been twelve years since I've seen that great show.

I may not remember much, but I do remember that I was disappointed with how it ended. I like this ending, alot better. I would like to see little Fireballs and little Aprils running around. keep up the great work.I hope there's more to come in the future. later.