Mew, this is so sad, but in a good way. A bit confused though.

wow this is great!

except the format and stuff...that kinda annoyed me a bit. it discouraged me from reading it many times until i finally listened to Saronai...

you've completely captured the essence of the 8 year old Rin. (not an easy task)

keep writing!

This is a really great introspection of Rin. He's my favorite character, after Alice, and it's wonderful to see how well you've captured the essence of what must torment him. Nicely done.

Very nicely written. Introspective fics like these are difficult to write well, but you nailed it. Thanks for writing this!

I love this. Poor Rin. He's always been my favorite PSME character and I think you captured him well. There's a PSE section now, if you want to move this story over there.

This is really a sweet little fic. Not too many people actually address poor Rin's feelings, in my experience anyway. I wrote a fic that was remarkably similar to this, but it more dealt with Shion on the moon. Poor Rin, he has to deal with two stages of Angst. We feel for him.

Very good. The formatting was distracting and annoying, but I thought it was a nice piece for destructive little Rin. ;)