 hikaharu13 4/3/11 . chapter 1love it pls do more love it to the bone |
 UchihaNa 9/2/09 . chapter 1Kya! hat'sjust SO CUTE! I totally love it!
and I think the last part was the better one 'lowered himself to sit on the floor, taking Kazu with him and never letting him go. He squeezed him tighter, indicating that he had no intentions of leaving the boy that had given him wings.' Really, I loved it al! |
 Masi-no-Ichigo 4/28/09 . chapter 1Hm so. Just because I'm weird and like to flip through old stories, I was being weird and flipping through old stories and thinking"What did I review for this one?
Turns out I didn't. And seeing as nowadays I kinda want you to put up a story just so I can feel proud and review for you because I know how important review are for writers and all, this seemed like the perfect opportunity for me to gush over something for no reason. OTL DUN judge me for that. The review won't be as current so it might not mean as much, but!
So. Yes it's corny, yes it's pure fluff, but it's also just plain CUTE. I love mirror images like, the idea of Kazu turning away just as Ikki opens the door, and vice versa, I find it adorable how similar the two boys can be even while they're so different, y'know? The perfection of that is just too cute. -love
Also remember,-love is for the hearts since they break the review's code. Dx BUT! BUT! It's so perfect how you set it up like with Akito and the musletoe and what not...
Holy shiznit WHAT THE HELL IS MY COMPUTER DOING TO THE REVIEW BOX...everytime I try to type something is scrolls back up...so please try to ignore any typos? Dx Sorry.
But! The imagery in the entire thing is love the little things especially, like Kazu mussing up his hair all "UGH you woke me up... and Ikki pulling his fingers along the hat's hem refolding it or the like.
And the kiss itself is just so loveley the little melty-ness of Kazu is just so precious and we all know that's exactly what Ikki does to him and I love it.
And oh it's such a pretty fic, even if it IS freakishly cute and pure fluff, even if it's just a TAD bit corny as well. Baw I want that necklace now. xD
Much much much love I'm saving this to make sure you get it, ne? |
 NeuroticNut 8/15/08 . chapter 1These two are just so damn cute!*rips out hair
It's almost frustrating.-NN*grumbles* |
 xxoxLOVELESSxoxx 6/19/08 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story! You wrote it very well. You've kept Ikki and Kazu in character which is fantastic! The little silver wing necklace was a stroke of pure genius and suited Ikki well. Well done! There's not enough of this pairing out there even so, they're the cutest (and most obvious!) shonen-ai/yaoi pairing in manga! Keep up the good work! |
 MissaSolemnis 4/27/08 . chapter 1Hmnn... Correct me if I'm wrong...
I've been listening to old music lately (coz I find that old music is much better that contemporary music) and the title "Santa Baby" rang a bell.
The first stanza was "Santa baby, just put a sable under the tree, for me, i've been and awful good girl, Santa baby, Just hurry down the chimney tonight.
I know it's irrelevant, but it was sung by Marilyn Monroe.
I must say, you should try listening to it, if you haven't already.
That's all.
Good Job
Cheerios,
Missa-chan |
 Udyjay 4/1/08 . chapter 1. . . AW! That's so sweet! ;v; It made me smile sadly, and just... aww. |
 Jaribo 1/27/08 . chapter 1aww how sugar coated, that waslike mayjor fluffy{. fluffy bear
ive never noticed how bitchy akito can be i mean, he was purposly trying to put kazu in his place, geez.. lol
um yeh i thats it... bye bye *waves* |
 minoki 1/12/08 . chapter 1aww thats so sweet. |
 ren 1/5/08 . chapter 1 dang kazu got home fast o_o
very cute :D |
 Artemis 1/4/08 . chapter 1 How cute! |
 aoh 1/2/08 . chapter 1 the boy that had given him wings... so sweet... |
 Yuanfang 1/1/08 . chapter 1Aw! Amazingly adorable! |
 Misguided Angel of Death 12/30/07 . chapter 1Aw! Another adorable one! |
 PrincessnekoTsuki 12/27/07 . chapter 1 OMG that was just like a kitten Cute and Fluffy. All I can say is aw. |