*sniff* aw. update soon!

Wow, that was interesting. Is it finished? I really loved it, good job!

It's very intriguing story. I'm looking forward to see development of their relationship. I feel sorry for Severus though I don't think he deserve forgiveness.
Did he betrayed Order or only take advantage of the situation?
I can't wait for more.

This is quite intriguing. If they just stay status quo it would be boring, but one or both must move against each other in some way - closer, further away, more negatively or positively. I'm very interested to see where you choose to take it.

In fact, they both seem to be hurt people, though Hermione is the most hurt of both.

Is there more>

This continues to be a very thought provoking story. I like it alot. I wonder where it is going. I look forward to finding out.

E.

I really really like everything about this so far. I like severus and hermione the way you have portrayed them thus far. I like the setting and premise and plot. I really hope you continue because I think it will be great.

This is a nice start! update soon!

I'm loving the flow of your story. Great quality of work.

I remember that dark one-shot. I'd like to see how you're going to develop it.

Sounds pretty good so far!I really like your cliff hanger.

Wow! can't wait for more. there's a dreamy quality to this.

Very good so far :) I like how you don't give away too much in backstory.