Nice, yet another great story. I was slightly confused at the beginning due to the fact that I assumed the story was being told from Kagome's point of view. I'm sad that Kagome died, although, what person would kill for a toy? It's even sadder for Kikyo lol.

No spelling/grammar mistakes spotted!

Keep writing, I can't wait to read more!

wow! i love your story! I must say, when I first read the summary, I thought it was from Kagome's pov... but I think it really fits Kikyo... I mean (in the manga/anime) she must feel bitter and all that with Inuyasha and Kagome together and all that, but in the end she becomes her former self again and is more compassionate and at peace, and I think your story captured that transformation she goes through!

this story is really well laid out!

for a sec there i thought that kagome was the one writing the diary 'cause of the summary. it totally caught me off-gaurd to see that it was kikyo who was writing the diary instead

the story was so sad, it almost made me cry!!

and it touched my heart to see that love lasts for a long time (in this case, inuyasha's undying love for kagome even though she died :'[)

this story is amazing :) great work!

I love this story and it is so true on how love works great job

aw poor kikyo this is probably the first fanfict where i really felt sorry for her good job

This is such a good story!

Wow...so touching...! I wasn't expecting this to be from Kikyou's perspective at first, haha. When I realized it was though, I thought the final pairing would be Inuyasha/Kikyou and then I'd be kind of sad...(since I love the Inuyasha/Kagome pairing so much! Though I can tolerate Inu/Kik, of course, hehe.) Anyway, I love the suspension in this and how you displayed Inuyasha's deep, sincere love for Kagome- almost made me cry!
And then I felt really sorry for kikyou, too. T_T

Overall, had a great impact on me! Keep up the lovely work!

~Ha-chan (Hatsuya)

this story was so beautiful...im not really a kikyo fan but this was a great story and you made kikyo a great character!
i also love how you make inuyasha not choose to go with anyone else...i know some people would have wanted you to have him move on but i think that you just showed that in this story his love for kagome was so great! this made me cry!!
amazing, beautiful, wonderful, awesome...i could just keep going on!!
hope you keep writing more for inu/kag!! ur great! :)

even though a lot ppl make kikyo mean and slutty and whatnot, u made her the victim instead of kagome. generally, i'm not a big fan of kikyo, but this story was just "off the heazy"

damn, i felt stupid saying that, but how else would i describe ur wonderful story? =D

This story is great. Inu/Kag all the way!!

Oh no...
Poor Kikyou.
Well at least she found love right?
Kudos to you, this is very well written!
This fic reminded of that song by Brandy...ugh what was it called?
Oh! Have You Ever!
Have you ever loved somebody so much it makes you cry?
Have you ever needed something so bad, you can't even sleep at night?

I love that song, and this fic!

this is so incredibly sad. iv'e never felt so sad for kikyo before (i actually kinda hate her, so this is sayin something)


I absolutely LOVE this story!
Can you check out mine, too, please?


hannahkimi

You made me cry, I love this oneshot you did a marvelous job. I felt stupid thinking that the person doing the dialog was Kagome at first, but then it took me a while to figure out it was Kikyo. I'm an idiot, anyways I really did love it even though it was sad when Kagome died.

lol i have to stop readin ur fics-all of them make me cry! i hate kikyo but this let up on the hate. it gave me an insight into how se might feel

Aww, so sweet! And so sad...

Kipcha