 Firaa 2009-12-06 . chapter 77 This was such a brilliant story! I'm glad I spent the time reading it, though the few chapters towards the end were particularly ** me, because I was just dying for the happy ending.
Still, a nevertheless wonderful read. Thank you for doing such justice for the puppy love couple. |
 the voice of singing clouds 2009-12-04 . chapter 77this story was amazing. one of my favorite stories ever. thinking back so much happened and i just fell in love with all your characters. can't say how thankful i am to be able to enjoy this amazing piece. i'm so happy that there was a happy ending for reg, rom, and rem. ^^
thank you so much.
your fan |
 LGSnow 2009-12-02 . chapter 77Wow. I said before that I love this story, and I reiterate that. There are so many things that I could do with my spare time, (or lack thereof that I make into spare time) and it is stories like this that make me glad I choose to read fanfiction. I really appreciate all of the work that you clearly put into this, and I am very, very glad that it was finished, and not left at some indefinite horrible cliff-hanger like many are. I could blather on for a while longer, but I'll just say that I'm looking forward to reading of your work. |
 dhubigh 2009-12-01 . chapter 77Hi, just wanted to say, this is a brilliant story! I've been ill for the past wee while, and your story has kept me nice and occupied. Its been read in about 3 sittings, and i loved every bit of it. Fantastic plot, extremely well written, and the twists and turns just made it impossible to stop reading. Im rather glad that i only found it once it was complete, i dont think i could've handled some of your cliffhangers! I thought the bonding ceremony was brilliant, was it an origional idea, or bits and peices drawn from other sources?
Fantastic story, and the was the epilogue was written was really well. |
 TrippleZeroItalics 2009-12-01 . chapter 77Okay. Wow.
So. Just finished it all.
First of all I just have to say:
YOU ARE FREAKING AMAZING.
Well, now THAT'S off my chest...
This is a wonderfully written, creative story, with so many fantastic, original ideas. That has to be the thing I wish to commend you upon the most - you included so many original details (some finer, some larger) that are completely different to the usual clichés brought about literally everywhere. I really appreciate even the smallest of your own invented details - they were a right treat to have alongside the plot.
Oh, and thanks for mentioning Regulus' school being in Australia. Love the little mentions we get sometimes!
In regards to Romulus' situation, I remember how stunned I was at your cleverness when [spoiler - if anyone's not yet read it, pry your eyes away!] he came back not dead. I was absolutely taken with Remus and co the whole time, but now that I look back on it, it all just makes so much sense!
The one thing I have to criticize, if you can even call it criticism, is that I found Remus to be rather ooc throughout the entire thing. Understandable, as it's an AU and his situation is completely different to what we're used to, therefor his personality being different is accurately justified if only by what he's been through, but I still thought I should bring it up. I did, however, find Sirius to be really spot on in character, mostly in regards to his attitude towards the public's view on his sexuality and relationship, and how he reacts to Remus. Stubborn, protective, and lord of mercy adorable...
So thank you very much for the brilliant story, and after reading this and your Trouble series, I am proud to say I can hardly wait for your next RLSB piece, and that you now have a nice spot in my favourite authors list.
Best wishes!
TZI |
 Claireness 2009-11-30 . chapter 59I'm on the 59th chapter... I just cried my eyes out.. again.. and again and again...
Don't get me wrong, I love a good story that can pull me inside of it in matter of seconds.. and leave me so emotional the minute I stop reading it...
I know you're finished writing the story.. and I'm not skipping to the end just to appease myself, but if it doesn't have a happy end I'll hunt you down and inflict some serious damage to you ;).
I'm of course kidding :), I said it only to illustrate just how much I want a happy ending of this really remarkable story..
Very good job...
p.s. I wish that you could just take it and publish it without regard to copyrights.. I hope you'll take your great talent and write a story without others' characters in it so you could claim it as totally your own. |
 moonfoot13 2009-11-29 . chapter 77wow i cant believe that this is over, i feel a bit of a loss. its definatly one of the best storys ive read :} |
 Illyra 2009-11-28 . chapter 77Both chapters together! Thank you very much! I loved this whole story since the beginning and the last two chapters showed me again why.
The hearing was awesome. First the unfairness of their fathers being judges, than the confirmation of my feelings about the accident. I´m very happy for Reg,that he could help his brother, salvage his relationship with him and that his son is magical.
Your portray of Walburga is so fitting! Half-blooded grandchildren or no grandchildren at all?
The last chapter is just sweet and absolutely wonderful. I LOVE the Happy-End!
And thank you for the explaining notes! I wondered about the centaurs. |
 SaNgO-ShIpPo 2009-11-27 . chapter 77I loved it!xD |
 Lucy-the-Starfish 2009-11-27 . chapter 77Okay, firstly this, and chapter 76, is great. Really good job.
Secondly (More importantly) this was a really amazing story to read. I've been following it for about a year now and every update has left me wanting more. The plot was brilliant, the writting was enthralling (sp?) and the way you let the story play out slowly was amazing. I feel really privilaged to have found such an amazing piece of work. If this were published, I'd buy it. Looking forward to all your future work. XD xx |
 Zilander Kat 2009-11-27 . chapter 77This was SO good, I believe it is one of my top faves for HP fanfiction and it was incredibly long, which is nice in a good fic! I was so worried it wouldn't be a happy ending even though you said it would be, I just couldn't see how it would turn out well- but look, it did! SQUEE~!
Okay, now I really loved your characters and the plot, it was so much different from the canon characters, but at the same time, not. I think you are brilliant! And even though Remus was acting so badly, I could not bring myself to hate him, or even Charlie. I'm not quite sure how you managed that, since the very thought of them together made me quite upset. Once again, brilliant! :P
Thanks for the wicked read!
Cheers,
Zilander Kat |
 Jessica 2009-11-26 . chapter 77 This fic managed to keep me entertained for an entire day. Well, if you forget about sleeping and shopping, sixteen hours. Well done. Not only was it long enough to take me that long to read it, it was definitely interesting enough to keep me reading it through until the end. That is a feat accomplished by few. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. |
 Moosxaxlot 2009-11-26 . chapter 77OMG!
Amazing!
I haven't had a computer for a few months and only now got to read the last few chapters.
I'm very impressed.
They made the wait worth while. Thanks~
:3 |
 Guro 2009-11-26 . chapter 77 Wow. This is truly like the ending of the Harry Potter series - a happy ending, but sad nevertheless. I'm going to miss the updates and the "new chapter" feeling :) I wish this was a book so I could keep it in y shelf, always! |
 elliehart 2009-11-25 . chapter 77thanks for the amazing story. The epilogue was very nicely written :)
well done!! I'm sad that it's over :( |
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