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| Rosie-Chan 2008-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWah! Chinna doesn't suck! :[ I laughed so hard... |
| Jackalackala 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseOh gosh, the review button actually worked. What I mean to say is, I am SO incredibly sorry that this is so late. I don't really just mean a review, I mean keeping in touch at all. I've had a lot of work to do, and I probably would have actually replied to the email already, but...my inbox was wiped. :( Could you kindly please send it to me again? I'm sorry. But I figured I might as well do something semi-constructive (...) instead and review something while I was at it. So I chose this one. I HATE RUBIK'S CUBES. And I agree with Niou that they have nothing to do with one's intelligence and they are simply...the root of all evil. My god. My friend gave me this COMPLETELY nasty one for some reason...it's a 4x4 and I haven't yet touched it and am waiting for it to just either do itself or disappear. Jackal. Oh, you poor baby. All of his days seem to be bad days, apparently... I felt really bad for him because you KNOW there will never come a day when not a single misfortune befalls him. (Prime minister?) And I love Niou. Seriously, where do you get people like that...? I'm terribly glad that I don't know him. But he's so marvelously scary and shameless... Yukimura = the scariest person alive. I swear. That joke just emits so much creepiness. And the way Kirihara says that 'he was having one of his weird humour moments this morning' really terrifies me such that...he does that often? Speaking of Yukimura, as of the time I'm writing this (a few days before, actually) Prince of Tennis is...is...over. I feel terribly sad. Anyway. I loved the story, even though I first read it over two months ago...haha. Working on it. Favorite quote: "Life just wasn’t fair to the bald." Because it isn't. XD Not to say I'm bald, but... Thanks so much for the excellent story...as I said, I enjoyed it a lot! And I apologize for not keeping in touch well at all. Have a fantastic day! |
| LiQuYu 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abusePoor Jackal. He really should've just stayed in bed. The hedge talked to Jackal. lol. Rubik cube. Evil Rubik cubes... *glares at unsolved rubik cubes* Maybe I should just cheat one day and just peel off the stickers and put them on the right sides. =D Hmm.. favourite part? I think when Niou decided to assign Jackal his babysitting job. " “He’s your problem for the rest of the day!” continued Niou, eyes furiously daring Jackal to make any form of protest. “Entertain him, feed him, bloody well dig him a grave and bury him in the garden for all I care. If you let him leave the house, then I will personally force you to have hair implants.”" lol. What are you feeding your plot bunnies? They must be working hard to come up with all these ideas! *gives plot bunnies carrots* Let's hope the carrots don't turn into a cat and a parrot. :D Well, onwards!~~`* |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseNice story! |
| gribbit 2007-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYOU MADE ME CHOKE ON MY CARROT JUICE! D:< (yes amazingly i'm drinking carrot juice.) the portrayal of jackal's mom is...well...hilarious is an understatement. i loved the inanimate objects, but TEH HEDGE just PRAWNS. ’It’s not even a proper puzzle, because it’s got nothing to do with IQ whatsoever and it’s purely a matter of whether you can visualize little pointless squares rotating round a centre’. i disagree. it's got nothing to do with IQ or visualisation! it's just...memorising pointless formulas...(i managed to conplete one in an hour the first time my senpai threw me one. now it's in about...two minutes?) ...jackal...was so shocked...that he lodged himself in the hedge by jumping backwards? YOU GO HEDGE (: that was definitely my favourite bit. *misspellings in the above review are throughly intended. oh did i mention i pity the cube? |
| Britix 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseYAY! YOU PROMISE?! YOU REALLY TRULY PROMISE?! I'm going to hold you to that. XD Drabblethings = love... as always. "“What do you get if you cross a cat with a parrot?” Jackal shrugged. “A carrot.”" Hehe.. that joke is almost as bad as the ones I tell! And I get the half a minute of silence after the punchline, too. But then I usually just get slapped and get told that I'm a loser with a retarded and warped sense of humour, or something. ;-; You want to know the joke I tell the most, right? You do? Okay, here goes! Why couldn't the cat eat its dinner? ... Because its head was stapled to the floor! -fits of laughter- ...Yeah, okay. I'm sorry. Don't hurt me. xD "“I’m not surprised now,” gasped Jackal, reaching for a glass of water. “That does sound like the kind of thing Mura would find funny…” He tipped the glass up, only to discover that Akaya had drunk it while he’d been busy trying not to become a victim of Death by Sandwich. It was going to be a long, long day." Death by Sandwich.. made me almost fall off my chair from laughing so hard. :3 "When I finally become prime minister, Jackal thought, I will have a magical entertainment centre, in which you could never get bored and everyone is bald." Have I told you how much I love your portrayal of Jackal? Well, all the Rikkai characters, but you know. Jackal... the randomness... and the baldness... and the armadilloness... :D Anyway, yeah. Update O:CP, and my life will be complete. -Glomps!- |
| Ria Sakazaki 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abusecute! that was very entertaining indeed. i had fun reading esp when Akaya's parting with Jackal. oh one request, more NiouChouRyoh please? |
| Adelle-chan 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI know that joke... It was one of the lamest joke that was delivered ever, but why did it cracked me up this time? Much love for you! P.S. Funny that you like Saitoh-san... I was under the impression that you would be after someone like Nakagauchi Masataka (he played Niou) or Yagami Ren (Yukimura) or Kanesaki Kentarou (*drolls* Sanada). But anyways... Aiba IS love. But with Shirota, it's much love! |
| Ryuu Amethyst 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseOMGOMG! LOL! Sandy-sama, Once again, you managed to help brighten my life!! ^^ The hedge is talking, THE HEDGE IS TALKING! *faints* Just had to quote this one: "When I finally become prime minister, Jackal thought, I will have a magical entertainment centre, in which you could never get bored and everyone is bald." That was megaLOL worthy! |
| Olivine 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuse... I found the joke funny -.- m many many things I liked about the story and too many to list, so let me the list the things I mildly didn't like: 1) ok I raked through your story and couldn't find anything (which is actually pretty amazing) but could you just clarify what happened here? "Jackal’s brain frantically worked to try and separate the syllables. His limbs frantically worked to try and get him out of Niou’s hedge." Was he shoved into the hedge? That was the only thing. But seriously, everything else was .. I don't want to say perfect out of habit, but perfect to some extent. There was detail and the flow was nice. And the descriptions were creative... colorful and it was funny, like always. Much better in writing than your last one, in my opinion. keep up the good work tiger :) |
| Fachel 2007-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuse“Uh huh. You just get Maru-chan to throw a Rubik’s cube at them and see which one attacks him.” HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. *chokes* And a Merry Christmas to you. |
| Hropkey 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseThe clock struck half past six in a bored way that announced to the world that it only kept on doing this job because it was waiting to get noticed on the music scene. And then they’d all see, oh yes. I swear, you need to write a book one day. I'd buy it in a heartbeat. I knew people at nerd camp who could finish Rubik's cubes in about a minute. It was SCARY. I've never been able to solve those, to be honest. But THANK YOU for updating! I needed my Rikkai Crazy right before Christmas! (...Even though I'm Jewish. Whatever, I get christmas presents from my friends anyway. XD) Also, Sukitomo: I looked it up and it has HIROKI AIBA! YAY! =DD No man should be able to make the Kira Kira Kira dance that sexy. I actually know a Hiroki Aiba lookalike in my math and science classes. He looks like Hiroki Aiba and has a surfer dude voice. It's so amusing. although not as bad as KC, the super-surfer-dude. ("KC, you got this problem wrong." "Oh, I did? ...Bummer." He actually talks like this- it's so amusing.) Anyways, sorry for not talking about your story at all, but.. um, yeah. (Gah, musn't let the valley girl freaks invade my brain! Must stop doing that!) |
| Mooshie 2007-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse...I love you so much for this. SO MUCH. D8 Pure beauty, that's what it is. -tear- The "cat-parrot" joke made me pretty much pass out from laughter. xD I gave up on the Rubik's cube. >.>;; IT CHALLENGED MY FEEBLE MIND. Happy Holidays! ^^ |
| serenitatis417 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseHumm... shall I be offended? Mah, I'll pass it off since it's Christmas. ;3 So Niou DOES care! XDD Bleh, I gave up on Rubik's Cube. There are these tricks to complete them in less than a minute on Youtube, but whatever. Can't be bothered. xP "When I finally become prime minister, Jackal thought, I will have a magical entertainment centre, in which you could never get bored and everyone is bald." Ahahahaha. The Rikkai Crack seems to be rubbing off Jackal. Oh oh, and I absolutely agree with you on that Saitou is teh smex. |
| scorch66 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuse“I knew I hated Hungaria,” muttered Akaya. “Hungary,” Jackal corrected. There must be something wrong with me. I swear, I didn't even notice that and actually believed that Hangaria was a country. The Rikkai Crazy must be affecting me as well. *facepalms* My 2 fav lines: "Jackal’s scalp tried to crawl away in fear." & "Jackal double-checked the time on his watch (a move not unnoticed by the clock, which instantly vowed revenge)"-I love how you give inanimate objects thoughts and feelings. |