This has a really good start if you updated this would be like the best Lily and OC there is. please update

GYAH! WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE!

*Puts a quill in your hand*

This is a fabulous story so far! I love it! No one ever talks about the kids after book 7.

PWEASE? *Puppy face*

This plot is wonderful!

Now, for critiqueing, i cant do mutch... IT'S SO GOD!

A+

Wonderfully paced and writtian. Keep it up!

Continue please?