I really liked this story! I love how you made everything happy in the end. When I finished reading The Silver Kiss, I was sad that Simon left, and I liked how you made him come back and now he and Zoe can be happy together,even though there has been sadness in both of their lives. You are a great writer. Sorry I don't have any criticisms to help you improve, but there really wasn't anything to improve upon.

Aw that was so sweet.

OMIGAWSH!

I love thatstory.

&& you wrote good!

ok, I pushed the button. I think it is very well-written & I think you definantly should continue with it. please explaine how simon became human in more detail if you can, because it was a little fuzzy.

Yeah, given it's your first, i won't be so harsh, but you really shouldn't make it so easy on them. Things are just falling into place & you don't want a story with no conflict because then it's not really that great a story. Have some hurdles, you might say. And, this is just me being OCD, PLEASE edit! (Hint: you're missing words & have halfway finished ones & misspelled. Misspelled words drive me nuts. But, again, that's just me.)

nice i loved this ending story!

this is great keep working on it.

also who says that you dont have a talnt for whriting your great i bet that you could make the best vamp novle of all time.

Aloha Gruff Lord

u so r a good writer & i really hope u keep on going with this story because its really good! ;)

girl i know i liked that book too! i finished it last night,i cryed so much! i really liked it but i dint really understand d ending but after readin ur storie it made me feel better cause i dint want simon to die! well g2g!

Your story is absolutely amazing! I love it so much!