THIS WAS WONDERFUL! Except for Don or whoever!:P GREAT Story! Keep writing!

Aww...that was sweet. I really liked the whole ND is a waitress thing. Why was Ned from another county, though? And why do people keep saying he has brown hair/eyes? He is so blonde!

For this story I would use the phrase "So..." my friends use it all the time to describe something without actually describing it. So cute. So short. So fun. You So kept all of the characters perfectly. And so I must say that So... describes it perfectly D

That story was so sweet! Loved the way it rolled along. (All of a sudden, many authors are writing stories that are similar. No offence to anyone though, just wanting something different)

Oh, that was terrific Thank you so much for writing it And Merry Christmas!

wow...that was awesome and sweet and i loved it great job

Lovely fic. I love how you wrote their first day.