I've noticed that all the good PD writers really enjoy Olive NOT getting Ned. It kills me, it really does. Still. This was excellent! You captured their characters just about perfectly and it's a great character study.

Good job :-)

Aw... Very sweet and sad, and perfectly characterized. Puts a touching and new spin on all relationships involved, and I loved it. (Side note, I really enjoyed the idea of Olive acting out the Ned + feelings = explosion) :)

The whole thing was wonderful, and I look forward to reading more by you. Thanks for sharing!

such a great take on the whole ned/chuck/olive saga. wonderfully written!

I really like the characterization in this one--You captured the characters' voices really well!

What a wonderful piece. The voice you gave Olive is just as she is on the show. Beautiful and brilliant. A bit sad, but very true. What a fantastic fic. You write Ned/Olive in a way that seems very realistic as far as their relationship goes. What a lovely story. :)

Aww...poor Ned. And poor Olive. I feel so bad for them. Olive, for not being able to be with Ned. ANd Ned, for his trust issues.