|Reviews for Helaine's inner girlyness|
| Thunderbolt2012 6/21/12 . chapter 2
This don't seem like Helaine is showing her inner girlyness. It's more like her inner Eremin, becuase she acts just as mean and nasty as Eremin would have been.
| helainewarrior 7/2/11 . chapter 2
I dont see the inner girlyness...
| Bane-Treller 11/24/08 . chapter 2
| Bane-Treller 11/24/08 . chapter 1
pretty good, has some mystery
| GoldenMerlin 2/16/08 . chapter 2
To be honest, you're in definite need of a beta reader...many grammar mistakes. Also, you've sort of stereotyped Helaine...Yes, she does have a temper, yes, she is very prideful, but there's more to her than that. Other than that the story's fine, and interesting.
| mattmanyah 1/9/08 . chapter 1
i like the idea of ure story but when r u going to up date it i want updates plz