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blacksand1
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Aww X3 Very sweet, just like the other one. Stunning, my friend, stunning.
OneDayAtATime
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Gosh! That was really sweet :)
claireXstork
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
omg that was amazing ur a really good writer i loved it
Golden Snowflake
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
Dude. That was phenomonal. AIR HUG! (hugs computer)
Roseminty
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
OH MY GOSH THAT WAS JUST AS AMAZING AS "FORK IN THE ROAD!" You are such a wonderful writer!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE PIPERxSTORK STORIES! PLEASE! I can't live without them!!
Madame Lady
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
D'AWW, you write Stork adorably. My innards feel all soft and squishy from all this fluff. xD

The detail...GAH, how I love detail. Beautiful, that's what this is.

I know you don't really write chaptered 'fics, but...I totally wouldn't complain if you did. C= Especially if you were to manage coming up with a plotline with this theme.
Dark knightress
2008-01-24 . chapter 1
Ah. That was good.
DarkSmokinAces
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Well I finally got around to reading this, Oh My God!
You never fail to impact me.

Once again I do love how you keep them in character, especially Stork.
It's perfect that he seems like such a worry-wart about the whole thing, making things so awkward for himself lmao.
I like the style in writing that you use, you already know that but I'm going to repeat it lol!
Like how you make them analyze and have this... inner conflict they try so hard to sort out.
How you do this with Stork ( and Ace in Level Three ) is just so delicious
Dotskip317
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
Wow... (*drifts off smiling like a complete imbecile*) :)

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Xekstrin
2007-12-26 . chapter 1
I wrote such a huge ass review and it didn't go through.

*cries in shame for not copy/pasting it before I sent it*

well there's nothing wrong with the story, not that there usually is, I was just expecting a bit more steam and less fluff. Oh man. I miss my old review. OH YEAH now I remember, I think Stork would like his feet better than Piper's. He's narcisistic that way. He'd be like "your feet are weird" and Piper would be like "They're not weird!" and he'd be like "Do you even LOOK at them? You have FIVE toes for the love of god! FIVE! That's two more than you're supposed to have! And they don't even have gripping pads at the bottom. They're like fleshy clods of stinky nothing useful." Piper "You realize you just said "stinky nothing useful," right?" "Well the description fits!"

TTNR,
The Dragonwings.

PS I submitted the story I told you about!
Green Peridot
2007-12-25 . chapter 1
Aw. You wrote the fluff well! Good old Stork. I'm not usually fond of Piper/Stork, but Fork in the Road and Shell- they worked, and quite beautifully at that.
*applauds*
Bone Oil
2007-12-25 . chapter 1
Just like A Fork in the Road, I loved this one. I just adore the way you create their relationship - so sweet but still unconventional and awkward in ways.
hUeS -of- h a z e l
2007-12-24 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, you are brilliant. THIS story is brilliant. I'm . . . wow, I'm speechless. Seriously. O_0 ♥ *loves*
defectivebrainstorm
2007-12-24 . chapter 1
My GOD, you're brilliant.
I loved it. You have like, mastered the english language. You use them so well, link them together and make them sort of paint the story rather then just tell it. Telling is good too, though, and you can do that too. You make them sort of dance together and it's great!
And I love the way you've portrayed both Stork and Piper. You've taken both characters and just made them your own, and made them alive, but still kept them in character. It's brilliant! I'm like, addicted to your style. I love how you make it cute and meaningful and angsty and even sad, but very bright and hopeful at the same time, I love it! It makes it real and dreamy at the same time. And I love the shell metaphor and everything, and your use of the language and the questionable little escapades between Stork and Piper. It's just really sweet and believable and really delicious. Is there gonna be a part three?
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