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jcogginsa
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
what about kong the animated series
Kendell
2008-04-26 . chapter 16
Nice battle, Cthulhu is truly evil but also ignorent of the good in humans and of the fact Zilla has a mate and of the fact Godzilla has two sons and that Mothra doesn't need mate...sorry about rambling on. Anyway you're improving and I enjoy reading this.
Kendell
2008-03-28 . chapter 15
Nice chapter, you're getting better. Cyvora is a Demi-god? who's her Avatar? Anyway great chapter, keep up the good work!

P.S. feel free to use Cyvora.
Kendell
2008-02-21 . chapter 14
Nice chapter, those guys really need to quit taking on Cthulhu one at a time, he's just too powerful for that. Good job, can't wait for the next one!
Kendell
2008-02-05 . chapter 13
Yeah it was short, I have to say you need to make your villians more powerful, for the most part the villians in this series are completely overpowered by the good guys, there are a few exceptions. I'm just saying you're making things too one sided, I just want to help you improve your writing so don't take it the wrong way. Your descriptions are getting better though. Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Kendell
2008-01-27 . chapter 12
Cool chapter, nice beam weapon for Cloverfield. I didn't expect the Outsider to be an avatar but it is pretty cool! Keep up the good work!
Kendell
2008-01-21 . chapter 11
Cool chapter, though I must say Vilgax is a lot tougher than that. Well you are improving in your writing style. I saw Cloverfield earlier, great movie. Good job!
Kendell
2008-01-17 . chapter 10
Nice chapter. Good job with Lance, will he worship Gyaos in this one too? Yeah, Ben 10! Good job, can't wait for the next chapter!
Kendell
2008-01-14 . chapter 9
Cool chapter, nice use of real world events. I can't help but think Drake is based off my character Lance though, feel free to use him if you wish as long as you give me credit. Cool chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Kendell
2008-01-13 . chapter 8
Cool chapter, when will evil aliens learn that they are no match for good giant monsters? Good job, can't wait till the next one!
Kendell
2008-01-13 . chapter 7
Cool chapter, Cyvora kicked butt, it was also funny as to Anguirus's reactions. Thanks for using my kaiju and keep up the good work!
Kendell
2008-01-12 . chapter 6
Cool chapter, better in terms of length over the last chapter. I did not see Cthulhu creating the Glorith but it makes sense now that I think about it. Can't wait for the next chapter, yeah Cyvora!

P.S. I updated Balto: Future shock if you want to check it out.
Kendell
2008-01-09 . chapter 5
Intresting chapter, a little too short for my tastes and you might of wanted to have something to do with Cthulhu in there since he's the main foe but good no the less. Can't wait for the next chapter!

P.S. I updated Balto: Future Shock.
Kendell
2008-01-07 . chapter 4
Nice chapter, favorite part was how the leaders reacted to the superhuman fight. This is ether going to end really good or really bad...
Kendell
2008-01-05 . chapter 3
I agree, what is Cthulhu made of and man he's powerful, I wonder how in the heck they'll take him down. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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