Reviews for When There Is Nothing Left

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KatjaNilsen 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseWhat can I say? sobs I love the idea of this story, but I love even more how you write it down. It is so fantastic! I am your new fan ;)
Bookflower 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseOh, that's so sad...
Kyra1 2008-01-16 ch 1,	abuseI'm a firm believer in the the idea that the opening line needs to be powerful and evoke a quick emotion in the reader. Yours was fabulous. My immediate reaction was "Oh god, why is no one there to help him." I've always loved Will, and for you to do that to him just crushed me, but at least it was done beautifully. I thought this was written extremely well. Good job and the best of luck to you in the contest.
The Trousers in Small Jars 2008-01-11 ch 1,	abuseOOH an angst fic! It's short but decently written. I am not familliar with this particular version of Robin Hood but I do know the story so I was not so lost.
Vida Loca 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abusewhimpers ...you killed Will... quickly changes mood But I've killed Will too so I forgive you. Its so... I can't think of a good word...sweet? ye, that'll do. I was laughing, I'm sorry, but I love this fic soo much it made me laugh... ehem... just to make things clear: I loved this fic because it was soo sweet.
dysfunctional pancreas 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseThank you for making me cry. Well. Nearly. But your writing always does that. And it's kind of okay cause I read the crossover one whose name escapes me first which made me happy. Also, I should be revising. And I'm not going to get much done tomorrow because I plan to watch Robin Hood DVDs in the morning. I may have to rethink that one.. So anyway, this may be a bit of a short review, but whatever. Incidentally, you left some Latin stuff at my house. I might bring it with me tomorrow if I remember. Don't eat me if I don't. Why, out of interest, are you killing off MORE Robin Hood people? Was Marian not enough for you? Meh. I hate it when they die. 'Allan is crying, was crying, had been crying, has been crying.' I want to give him a hug.. That line rocks. I would say all sorts of intelligent insightful things about it, but that would make me sound like I was trying to be too intelligent/in an Englsih exam, and it wouldn't be like me at all. I'm thinking them though. Although not in words. Words are overrated. Except when you use them. Also, I'm really bad at realising when people are dying. I got confused by the line 'He’s perfectly fine, after all, why should anyone scream like that?' and only realised afterwards how obvious it should have been. Maybe I need to read more cying scenes. Or just be more intelligent :D And incidentally, though I didn't leave a review for it because I didn't have anything to say, I really love Jack in that other one. Wait. Three Outside Observers. It rocks. It being the fic, not Jack, as he is in fact not an it, having a gender. I would go and read and review To Continue, but I need sleep, so it will have to wait. I had an Idomineo rehearsal today and it was so tiring. Possibly because I didn't have enough sleep last night. I really hope that if I ever get married (unlikely) I will be able to sleep at night. Because it would be gay if it took me ages to get used to sleeping with someone else and so for months I was chronically exhausted. Be thinking of what you don't like about me, have a good night, merry revision and fic writing and I'll see you tomorrow. xx
Kates Master 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseSighs Saturday has lead to an over indulgence of Robin Hood fanfiction. I ought to stop. Perhaps in the early hours... Beautifully tragic, because such a thing is all too possible. Keep writting Emma
Viv the Rabid Ballet Freak 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseEh, I don't know the fandom, so I can't really comment. I guess I didn't understand the way you used the ending line, also. Good luck! -BlackDaylight
piewacket 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseStargazing- Good job. Some lines that were particular standouts: “The blue eyes of the betrayer; the red blood of the betrayed.” “the day it stops is the day he loses everything he is”
nadia the demented one 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abusesob That was beautiful! I really thought it was emotinal and sad... and furthermore, I love betrayal! Poor Allan... and Robin... WILL! I'm sorry. I just really enjoyed the story. Last line use is excellent. ~Nadia
deleted and inactive 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuse'Tis kalesbohan from the comm :) For some reason I found this fic over here before finding it on LJ. To the reviewing. You made me cry! This was rather brilliant. And that one line, "Suddenly, inexplicably, he wants Djaq"... That is where I wept. I loved it. The prose is direct, it's all right there and it flows like a dream. Absolutely blinding fic. Great Allan POV. kay x
KeepingAmused 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseNO dammit. beautifully written, though =) x
Darren White 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseGreat piece, mate. Well written, in character, and just sad enough. You integrated the prompt nicely. Good job, mate, and good onya.
scully42 2007-12-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseI am, of course, in awe of you. Your writing never fails to move and entertain. [I've been close to tears wishing for more of "Fevered Dreams". Pretty please? With begging on top?] Love it!
gatewatcher 2007-12-24 ch 1,	abuseNicely done... very sad, but well written. I wanted to cry, to.

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