I love your author's note at the end, it made me giggle =)

Ohh, so in the end you added some lime (that's implicit sex). Personally, I love limes and lemons(they are explicit), but in this story is a bit out of place. Also, putting a higher rating limits the amount of readers of your story for just one paragraph. It's up to you to decide whether this it worthy or not.
Now I realice the comment I made about Cloud before was in this chapter ^_^U It's been a while since I read the other one so I couldn't re-call it well.

See ya~

You know I was kinda expecting a more gorish scene.
Sorry for not posting the review before but I was moving to my residence, then the internet broke and finally I got the flu (My, what an explanation!)
I always though getting the moon arp so easily was only for shortening-game purpose.
Poor Cloud, you aren't telling him what happened with Zack (who must be breking free from his tomb).
Also, I enjoyed stalker!Vincent, XD the pair can't get some intimancy (they'll get it lat... oops, this is for the next review)

See ya~

Awesome, finally they are together. Sweet.

Definitely people must be on holiday or something. Cos, if not even this chapter won't wake them up, then they're simply dead. Period.
I won't even say more, though this chapter deserves mu-u-u-uch more words than this. ;)

aww..i really wish to take little sephy to my home! i bet he's really a cutie back then..maybe sephiroth will be more handsome if he didn't turn to be a bad guy?

Wut?? No review yet? Heh, people must be on vacation or dead to the world with tiredness after a week's work :) But here comes the weekend... /makes a note to check again on Sunday night, mwaha!/

Such a bomb of a chapter!...

Mwahaha, gonna bring my "Vanish" bottle, is that ok? It doesn't contain bleach but works quite well for all kinds of stains, blood included.

Oh my, someone's gonna have a hard time in the next chapter, uh. . . and this one set the things quite well for what's to come. Poor Aerith. . . :)

*dreaming of Sephiroth* m

LOL... Vincent and Yuffie...well...seen.

Looking forward to an update. Thanks for this one. Can't wait to find out what happens. I love your originality in the story - taking the reader deeper.

THE REVIEWING FOOL

Hi ya!
This chapter looks simple but it's quite ok. Hehe, Aeris' wet dreams, I bet Seph has them too.
Humm, I wonder what exactly read Vincent, but I suspect it has to do somthing with Seph. I also wonder what could Yuffie ask him...
I see you know where the Cait Sith came from, don't you?
Something tragic... I don't think it'll be the "ortodox" death, right? Don't worry, I'll bring some Bleach... (Ops looks like Ichigo and Cloud are arguing about spiky hair and oversized swords) Gotta leave.

See ya~

A more descriptive than narrative chapter (I mean it's narrative but not about the story itself). I like the theories about the cetra they're always amusing.
Now it's clear that Vincent is Sephiroth's father (If Seph is Cetra and warriors certa had blood/mental conexion they are quite clear the flashbacks).
And I also like your poems. Keep it up. I'll be waiting for more.

See ya~

I had almost forgotten the story, but now I can't wait for your next update. Love the interpreted history etc.

Thanks! Till next time.

Hope you update soon (no pressure)

Something I like so much in your stories, especially this one, is the fact that there are so many things going on and, even if you don't always follow more than one set of characters in a single chapter, still there are so many things to find out, on so many levels.

It's always most interesting to me to read about Cosmo Canyon and the people there; then again all the Cetra-related revelations were so exciting to read about. And Vincent is such a shadowy character that always adds to the mystery of the story. Oh boy, not to mention that finding out that Sephy himself was a Cetra is something that would always, and I mean ALWAYS make my day, hehehe!! Now you left me wondering about his Cetran affiliation, whether it's on his mother's part, or on his father's... /kicks Hojo in the butt: "and I sure as heck wasn't thinking of you, slimeball!"/

This will get better and better!

So this is the second review. This chappter was truly intense. There was a bit of everything: Turks, Avalanche, Sephaerith <3
Still, it makes me wonder what's going to happen next with every one.
I'll be waiting eagerly for the next!

See ya~

Hi, it's me. I should have reviewed before, but I was extremely bussy. I'll make a little sumary. I liked all in this chapter, wait, is that a Cloti hint?! ;)
There's something that bothers me. Dark matter, isn't that the black materia? Or am I confusing terms? :P
A good chapter. Wait till I read the next for another review.

See ya~