Ohh...this is so sad. I couldn't read the last three sentences coz it's blurred by my eyes tearing up!! This is so beautifully written! Thank you.

I agree with the other posts: It would be nice to have a sequel where they could meet unexpectedly, perhaps just to say a final, and friendly, goodbye?

I always go straight to the Clois stories; but this was highly recommended at K-site. And I would certainly recommend this as well!!

Hey! I love this :) so sensitively done and painfully sweet! I really think you got inside Ollie's head really well!

Great!
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Poor Oliver and Lois.
I loved Oliver and Lois together in the show, if only he didn't leave ..

Not usually a one shot fan, but I really liked this. The emotions were real and I could "see" the characters.

You make me want to cry! That is so sweet and romantic...I guess i just have a thing for Ollie.

Very adorable love, but also very heart wrenching! Keep up the work!

another lollie! yay!

i hope you write more! i loved this piece; it's probably too cruel to ask for a sequel since anything else after this would mean lois betraying clark and we can't have that.

maybe a piece about how oliver comes to terms with everything and lois and him end up as just really good friends?

That was absolutely heartbreaking. The last lines in the story was it. It made me tear up. I remember the line so clearly.

I hope you write more about Oliver and Lois!

...aw.. That was touching. Nice piece.

OMG your story made me cry
its so good!

your deffinatly going on mu faves list


and btw

that song always made me think of lois and oliver too!

That was amazing. Everything about it was bittersweet. Great job!

Ack, that was intense and so sad! I'm a Clois shipper all the way but I had a soft spot for Lollie so bad LOL, I hated the way they ended it on the show (even though I'm glad they did part ways, I hated the way Lois got dumped)... this was wonderful!