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| nevermore199 2008-01-09 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was really amazing. Seriously, I loved it. You've got them both down so well, and it was just...awesome. Totally favorite-ing. Good job! |
| Awesome Rapidash 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good! I think you did a real good job of covering the sensitive issue of age in this story. Popuri is to young for Jack and she must face the fact that even though she loves him, ne cannot return her love. Popuri seemed to handle it well though. She cried yes, bur she did maintain her composure. Perhaps she's more mature than he knows. Nicely done! |