:sniffles: Oh Martha...

Thanks for writing.

I have heard of the show but I do not know much so I was a little confused. But nicely written. Good Luck!

I don't really get it, but I can get the emotions. It's sad, AE. But it's very nice. It was strange, though, to see so many paragraphs, and there were only a few sentances...

Good luck!

-BlackDaylight

A.E. Hall-
I love Dr. Who and your story has done the series justice.
This:
This was the Doctor he tried so hard to hide from everyone- and here she’d drawn it out with precision. Like the physician she was, drawing a blood sample to examine and discard. The proficiency with which she brought about one of his rare break-downs was astonishing.
is an absolutely lovely piece of writing. Good job.

Oh, so good, but so sad. Have you heard that Rose may be making a comeback in the coming series? This is a very realistic scenario (well, for the show-it's not too realistic to think of people changing universes in real life...) but I'd love to know how Martha brought this about. A second chapter or a sequel would not go amiss :D I especially liked the comparison of Martha drawing blood from the doctor, as a physician. My favourite sentence has to be-

There was nothing but blackness and the scattered pinpricks of light that were memories.

It sounds exactly like something that would happen in the Doctor's thoughts. I also liked the almost-kiss (reminiscent of the end of Doomsday, when he almost said he loved her).

Heck, I liked it all. If I keep saying things I like, I'll be here all day. Keep writing Dr Who :D

Aw, how heartfelt that was! Even though I didn't quite understand the fandom, that was really nice!

Loved the last line... Doctor's angry voice was a nice touch!

~Nadia

interesting story.. i can't wait for the creativity you will come up with =]

A powerful story, full of emotional ideas. I wonder if it might be only temporary--if they'll revert to the "correct" universes, given the way Martha went about the switch. I can't believe Martha would really have done this if she expected to die.

But then, I suppose, if she really wanted to make the Doctor happy she might well have done this (if she knew how). How did she do it? Another reason a sequel or second chapter might be in order.

9 out of 10 stars.

I LOVE Doctor Who, and this is a very plausible story for the fandom. I like the use of Martha to bring Rose back, and the way you have used the line is excellent. Good luck in the Challenge! :)

Oh my God. "Voyage of the Damned" is on tomorrow, and all through that I'm going to be thinking about this.. *sobs*

I loved the Doctor's moment of realisation. His thoughts of "wait, she'd have to be--" and how everything just stopped. Oh, now I'm all teary.

I'm SO voting for you.