Reviews for Mary Anne's Life

AnneGirl15 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseHey! A few nitpicks, your grammer could improve a little. I also noticed the chapters were REALLY short. Maybe make them a tad longer. Other than that, I think it's coming along great. I'd love to see more! ~Anne Oh, and if you have time could you check out my work pu-lease? THANKS!
the epitome of randomness 2007-12-30 ch 3,	abuseIt might just be that I don't like stories written in present tense, but there's something not quite right with this story...it's just bulldozing along and the chapters are just so short.
hollistar 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseI like :) A few nitpicks with the grammar, and although I LOVE the Tim Horton's reference (being Canadian and all ;)), I don't really think they have any in the States. Unless they've moved to Canada?
MuseUrania 2007-12-24 ch 1,	abuseSweet. :)