Why would anyone be offended? That was a great story! Loved Darien's thoughts, even as he was carking it.

::snicker"Did not."Did *too*!"Did not."
Did *too*!*sigh"Boys..."Did not."
Did *TOO*!"BOYS!"WHAT?"Whould you bloody well shut the hell up?:snicker
Krys

That was great. It sounds like something I'd write, but I'd probably mess it up, but anyway, nice job. _

TBH (unincorporated)

Loved it, you must write more ,

There's nothing at all wrong with this little vignette, the POV is perfect, angsty and poignant. Now do it again, from Bobby's POV!

Very good! I really liked this story..in fact, I'm putting it on my favorites. I should do that more often...

awesome story. i really enjoyed it

Ooh! Loved this, loved it I say! And no, the tone wasn't weird. It was very I-man-ish, and very well done. More! More, I say! What happened while Darien was unconscious?

That was great. I was in tears thinking that Darien was going to die. Thank goodness he didn't.

Awww, what a great fic! You really got Darien's character down. Great job!)

Amazing Fic. You really captured what Darien Fawkes would be thinking in the situation. You got his humor and his unique upbeat pessimism"Chrysalis and/or Arnaud didn't even get the chance to kill me. Cool. with great skill. I look forward to reading some of your other fics. This story has broken some of the Darien-angst I've been feeling lately. Keep writing!