I DONT LIKE MR. CURTIS! *pouts* but hey, i told ya i read this didn't I? Well i think this is really good Ace! i so cant wait for another chapter! ill tell ya funny story while i was reading this later, but i really like this!! great job!
Sammycakes

excellently written!
update soon!
=)

the breakfast scene made me laugh so hard. i could see soda secretively tampering with the toaster. and the toast flying from the toaster. darry being able to catch the pieces while two-bit couldn't. and seeing darry as a chipmunk. it was funny. it did that me a minute to realize who's point of view it was. i'm assuming that all or most of the story will be in darry's pov

Hey i like the story really i do i just noticed that Mr. Curtis seems a bit too much like Darry. According to the book he was almost exactly like Soda not Darry. He just looked like darry.
and well other than that i don't really see any problems
good start keep going
liz

This is definitely an original plotline. Interested to see more.

wonderful. i feel alittle sorry for darry though, his dad yelling at him... darrys my favorite next to johnny and dally.
please continue and update ASAP!

wow, nice job :]