well done! well done! Perhaps the best revised naruto version I have ever read. Yours actually made sense!

*claps*

Good job. A fun twist on a classic tale. Very nice

This is totally awesome, and very clever. Great job.

Rotflmao!
don't mind that, that was flippin' hilarious!

I was laughing the entire time!

Keep it up, I love it!^^

-Sharingan

O_o it took you 6 MONTHS to write this...wow...thats kinda scary...it was good though.