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narutonerd202
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
ha ha ha omg i cant stop laughing!! that was great!
Violetclaw
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
I find this story to be very good and hope to see more chapter's soon. Great Job Author and please continue :D :D :D :D

~Violet
narutoluvr4evr
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
I'm glad to see that you're pleased with this story, because it was very pleasant to read. ^^ The way you portrayed the characters is stunning. Iruka seems pretty in character, compared to some stories where he's a motherhen. And Sakura's reaction to the news was priceless.

As for Sasuke and Naruto...congrats. You really captured the personas (though they were a bit OOC, but understandable). I like how you hinted their...activities, without letting us read what actually happened. That would've taken away from the sentamentaltiy (okay...I KNOW I spelled that incorrectly. Sorry.)

All in all, very nicely done!
animechaser
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
i dunno...there just seemed something about it that seemed a bit empty. It was well-written and they way what was happening in Tsunades office was good. It was pretty realistic which is refreshing but it could have been a bit more humor just to lighten it up. there wasn't like a longing there for eachother and it was kinda kyuubi/sasuke which in this sense is kinda pittying to naruto. And it should have some more like the reactions back home. i guess the way they did that then walk back likes it normal and it seem like friends with benifits is weird. And there wasn't much character development for sasuke and naruto. like at the start they didnt argue or set how they were usually to eachother like good friends or companions etc.
shadowglove
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
i loved this!
freak-joy-spastic
2008-11-11 . chapter 1
Me likey the SasuNaru. This would be a great story for a sequel (tee hee) I'd love to see everyones expresion to their new relationship. Well, much anime love ~bye bye~
BloodHoarder
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
Wow...I really enjoyed this!
Mille Seseau
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
loving it!
is there more?
Felides quod Filidates
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
this was cool its the first naru/sasu fic i've read on and it was good i liked it so keep writeing pwease and all will be well in the naru/sasu fandom *cheeky grin*
merlioske
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
wow... i really really liked it. it was, to say simply, very amazing :)
Kidiu Anaji
2008-04-14 . chapter 1
Ah! Cute!
Viktrona
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
SEQUEL!
Ilamay
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
I like it. Simple and sexy. Thnaks for writing it. :)
Fer3333
2008-03-05 . chapter 1
oh my god that was good u are genius love it! Since i love ur writting alot i was wondering if u could do one fic about sasunarusai please i will love to read one of ur fics including those characters please and again that was awesome!
sehne
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Wow! I must say that this was a great fic. I really enjoy reading it. :)
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