Lovely. Reading this just made me feel good. I really enjoyed it. :)

I like this. Carving after this fashion seems like something Will would do, especially since we saw his carving of his father. And I like that Djaq wants to teach him something of hers to see him put his work with that. Good fic.

I love this :) Its really cute, but it also really manages to capture so much of the characters personalities :)

Simply beautiful. You painted vivid, real pictures through your descriptions. Lovely.

And long live Will/Djaq!

Wow, such a well-written, beautiful story. I just loved the whole idea of Djaq collecting Will's discarded pieces and interpreting his moods from them. Very original idea, and you pulled it off really well.

Your descriptive writing is wonderful. Will and Djaq is definitly the best ship to sail on.

The Spirit

Lovely - the idea of all the carvings is brilliant...cos, thinking about it, we see him carving fairly often, but he can't always be doing arrows...

Brilliant!

Emma

So damn cute! You should do a sequel or another chapter. Im just intrigued intensely by it. Very great writing, wonder, wonder, wonderful!

Oh, lovely. In every way. I love your Djaq POV. This was very, very well done. And so refreshing to find a story with such good flow and perfect grammar - it makes reading such a pleasure :D (please don't feel patronised by that, I mean it as a compliment :blush:)

One line made me laugh out loud: "His plans are well thought through and carefully executed, unlike Robin’s, which tend to be only half a plan, conceived on the way to Nottingham Castle." *grin*

I really enjoyed this, and the section post-Allan and the Fool is an absolute delight :D

kay x

Good! Liked your idea of Will still thinking of Allan as a brother!

Just curious: Have you changed time so that the thing with Annie and Seth happened after Djaq came to the Gang, or did Djaq just find an old piece an the others told her?

That was so very "wow." You really captured the two Will and Djaq the way the show would if it were focused on them. Well done!

You have such excellent descriptions! Really dug deep into his heart and brought it out in words. Nice job!

:D That was amazing! I do love Will/Djaq stories. Your story was perfect in every way, I couldn't find anything wrong with it. I was swept up in the fluff. Great job!

WOW. such amazing insight...beautiful descriptions

i'm in absolute awe.

i really enjoyed it! thank you x

i liked it!